Some proposed changes that help to make it easier to read, I hope.
https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi File Documentation/web/introduction.itexi (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1190 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1190: and how you actually @emph{work} with these text files you may Think it's simpler and better to say: "But if you don't have a clear idea yet how you actually @emph{work} with these text files" https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1202 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1202: LilyPond isn't one monolithic program as you may be used one -> a single https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1203 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1203: from graphical notation tools. Instead it is a system with graphical music notation tools. https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1204 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1204: several independent parts. This may seem irritating at first, "This may seem irritating at first," -> "This may not be what you're used to," https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1213 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1213: of other options, including MIDI. "there is a variety of other options" is grammatically correct, but sounds odd to a native. "there are a variety of other options" sounds better. Alternatively "a variety of other options are available, including MIDI" avoids the issue. https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1219 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1219: support you in working with LilyPond files. This would read better as: It can be unnecessarily difficult editing LilyPond input with a plain text editor, but fortunately there are a number of tools that actively support working with LilyPond files. https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1236 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1236: automatic command completion that helps you remembering remembering -> remember https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1237 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1237: the available commands and reduces misspelling errors at the misspelling -> spelling https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1240 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1240: While these are quite basic tools some programs offer you a "While these are quite basic tools some programs offer" -> "Some other programs offer" https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1241 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1241: complete editing environment for working with LilyPond score. score -> scores https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/diff/40001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode1242 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:1242: They may include templates and entry palettes, may support "may support" -> "support" https://codereview.appspot.com/60530047/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel