thanks for sharing, dave. wow, i imagine umeko must have been very beautiful... i had a japanese girlfriend in the late 1980s, and i still remember her fondly.
i can't say i read your score with the attention it deserves, but the first thing i noticed is that starting on m. 52 the rests in the middle voice seem to be missing (it's the lower part in m. 73). it also called my attention that there are several tempo indications through the piece, but no dynamics after the initial mf. other than that, i would have oriented some ties differently, specially on some chords. is this "out-of-the-box"? looks nice overall. good to see you around, dave, looking forward to reading your article! _______________________________________________ lilypond-user mailing list lilypond-user@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-user