As a first pass review:

Needs a midi section (I did a quick one with 'choir aahs' for vocals and
'acoustic grand' for the piano, \tempo 4=100, and it sounded quite nice.)

You are going to great lengths to keep this to 2 pages. This is fine but
Mutopia will want to create both A4 and Letter sizes so your paper
variables (2 A4 pages) will be commented out to accommodate this. On letter
size your manual breaks also will not do what you need them to do.

A suggestion: design for A4 but leave out the set-paper-size command and
remove manual line breaks. Remove set-global-staff-size so it defaults to a
little larger ( it will go to 2 systems on the 3rd page instead of one.)
Request (or add yourself) a Mutopia 'moreinfo' tag in the header with text
that the layout was designed for A4 paper size.

-glen


On Mon, Jan 20, 2014 at 4:00 PM, Gonçalo Nogueira <
jgoncalonogue...@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hello everyone,
>
> I am typesetting "Lied eines Schiffers and die Dioskuren" by Franz
> Schubert to
> contribute to Mutopia. This is my first time tweaking the default output
> and it
> is also my first time publishing the source.
>
> I am hoping that you can point some (probably present) bad practices or
> just
> plain mistakes. I have the source in a Github repo:
> https://github.com/jgnog/schubertdioskuren
>
> You can also find attached the source and the resulting output.
>
> Thank you for your attention,
>
> Gonçalo Nogueira
> about.me/goncalonogueira
>
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