On Tue, Jan 14, 2003 at 10:01:44PM -0500, Paul Davis wrote: (cut) >also, for folks here who are not on ardour-dev, please critique this: > http://www.op.net/~pbd/brochure.pdf
Read it and the only thing I could come up with, was an extra hyphen, which is undecided in English anyway :) [twenty first -> twenty-first] Also a minor nit: The text under the screenshot on the first page seems somewhat oddly aligned ? But for the rest, perfect, v
