Thanks for the review Randy! I'll make the changes for the next time we
post the series.

On 22/05/18 03:24 PM, Randy Dunlap wrote:
>> +The first task an orchestrator driver must do is compile a list of
>> +all client drivers that will be involved in a given transaction. For
>> +example, the NVMe Target driver creates a list including all NVMe drives
>                                                                      ^^^^^^
>                                                                    or drivers 
> ?
> Could be either, I guess, but the previous sentence says "compile a list of 
> drivers."

I did mean "drives". But perhaps "devices" would be more clear. A list
of all NVMe drivers doesn't make much sense as I'm pretty sure there is
only one NVMe driver.

Logan

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