Date: Fri, 8 Apr 2011 14:18:54 +0000

In particular:

  * The word `frame' was missing in `received frame',
    so it has been added.

  * The `RF' in `a RF' was both superfluous and awkward,
    so it has been removed.

As for the rest of the changes, well, I just couldn't help myself!

Signed-off-by: Michael Witten <mfwit...@gmail.com>
---
 drivers/net/wireless/ipw2x00/Kconfig | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/drivers/net/wireless/ipw2x00/Kconfig 
b/drivers/net/wireless/ipw2x00/Kconfig
index 5397cd1..5abf297 100644
--- a/drivers/net/wireless/ipw2x00/Kconfig
+++ b/drivers/net/wireless/ipw2x00/Kconfig
@@ -112,13 +112,13 @@ config IPW2200_RADIOTAP
        depends on IPW2200_MONITOR
 
 config IPW2200_PROMISCUOUS
-       bool "Enable creation of a RF radiotap promiscuous interface"
+       bool "Enable creation of a radiotap promiscuous interface"
        depends on IPW2200_MONITOR
        select IPW2200_RADIOTAP
        ---help---
-         Enables the creation of a second interface prefixed 'rtap'.
-         This second interface will provide every received in radiotap
-         format.
+         Enables the creation of a second interface (the name of which
+         is prefixed with 'rtap'), which provides every received frame
+         in radiotap format.
 
          This is useful for performing wireless network analysis while
          maintaining an active association.
@@ -129,9 +129,9 @@ config IPW2200_PROMISCUOUS
            % ifconfig rtap0 up
            % tethereal -i rtap0
 
-         If you do not specify 'rtap_iface=1' as a module parameter then
-         the rtap interface will not be created and you will need to turn
-         it on via sysfs:
+         If you do not specify 'rtap_iface=1' as a module parameter, then
+         the rtap interface will not be created automatically, but it can
+         still be created via sysfs:
 
            % echo 1 > /sys/bus/pci/drivers/ipw2200/*/rtap_iface
 
-- 
1.7.11.2.252.gc4a64c8

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