Hi Alia Thanks for the rewording, I agree that your suggeted text reads better.
We´ll incorporate this text along with further comments (if any) in a revised version of the draft. Regards Albert On Tue, Apr 14, 2015 at 9:04 PM, Alia Atlas <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Luigi, > > In Sec 3.1, as part of the Locator/Identifier Split, it says: > > "Locator/Identifier split: By decoupling the overloaded semantics > of the current IP addresses the Internet core can be assigned > identity meaningful addresses and hence, can use aggregation to > scale. Devices are assigned with relatively opaque topologically > meaningful addresses that are independent of their topological > location. > " > > This still doesn't make sense! > > "Locator/Identifier split: Decoupling the overloaded semantics of current > IP addresses allows devices to have identity-based addresses that are > separate from topologically-meaningful addresses. By allowing only the > topologically-meaningful addresses to be exposed to the Internet core, > those > topologically-meaningful addresses can be aggregated to support substantial > scaling. Individual devices are assigned identity-based addresses that are > not used for forwarding in the Internet core." > > is probably a lot closer to what you are trying to say - but please figure > out > what your points are and reread the text to make sure that it parses. > > This was in my comment and not the Discuss, so I am clearing that. > > Regards, > Alia > > On Tue, Apr 14, 2015 at 6:02 AM, Luigi Iannone <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Hi, >> >> Did you get a chance to have a look to the latest version of this >> document to consider clearing the open discuss? >> >> May be to be added to the next tele chat agenda? >> >> ciao >> >> Luigi >> >> >> On 02 Apr 2015, at 21:56, Luigi Iannone <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Hi All, >> >> authors submitted a new version of the LISP introduction document >> addressing all of the discuss and comments previously raised. >> >> Please let us know if there is any residual issue. >> >> ciao >> >> Luigi >> >> >> Begin forwarded message: >> >> *From: *[email protected] >> *To: *<[email protected]> >> *Subject: **I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-13.txt* >> *Date: *2 Apr 2015 14:27:11 CEST >> *Cc: *[email protected] >> *Reply-To: *[email protected] >> >> >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >> directories. >> This draft is a work item of the Locator/ID Separation Protocol Working >> Group of the IETF. >> >> Title : An Architectural Introduction to the Locator/ID >> Separation Protocol (LISP) >> Authors : Albert Cabellos >> Damien Saucez >> Filename : draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-13.txt >> Pages : 27 >> Date : 2015-04-02 >> >> Abstract: >> This document describes the architecture of the Locator/ID Separation >> Protocol (LISP), making it easier to read the rest of the LISP >> specifications and providing a basis for discussion about the details >> of the LISP protocols. This document is used for introductory >> purposes, more details can be found in RFC6830, the protocol >> specification. >> >> >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction/ >> >> There's also a htmlized version available at: >> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-13 >> >> A diff from the previous version is available at: >> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-13 >> >> >> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of >> submission >> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. >> >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >> >> _______________________________________________ >> I-D-Announce mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce >> Internet-Draft directories: http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html >> or ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt >> >> >> >> >
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