Hi Albert,

thanks for submitting the updated document.

I have have a few residual nits listed below. Fixed those we can move to LC IMO.

Ciao

L.



> 
>    LISP Nonce:  The LISP 'Nonce' field is a 24-bit value that is
>       randomly generated by an ITR when the N-bit is set to 1.  Nonce
>       generation algorithms are an implementation matter but are
>       required to generate different nonces when sending to different
>       destinations.  
[Luigi]
As stated for -07: What is a destination? Should be different RLOCs, for 
clarity.


The Clock Sweep mechanism is just about management should go in AOM.


The following document are not Normative:

 [RFC4086 <>]  Eastlake 3rd, D., Schiller, J., and S. Crocker,
              "Randomness Requirements for Security", BCP 106 
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/bcp106>, RFC 4086 
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4086>,
              DOI 10.17487/RFC4086, June 2005,
              <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc4086 
<https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc4086>>.

[RFC6275 <>]  Perkins, C., Ed., Johnson, D., and J. Arkko, "Mobility
              Support in IPv6", RFC 6275 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6275>, 
DOI 10.17487/RFC6275, July
              2011, <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc6275 
<https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc6275>>.





> On 5 Mar 2018, at 22:33, Albert Cabellos <albert.cabel...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi 
> 
> I'll post a new version without such sections shortly.
> 
> I volunteer to help writing the OAM document.
> 
> Albert
> 
> On Mon, Mar 5, 2018 at 9:35 PM, Dino Farinacci <farina...@gmail.com 
> <mailto:farina...@gmail.com>> wrote:
> >> On 5 Mar 2018, at 19:06, Dino Farinacci <farina...@gmail.com 
> >> <mailto:farina...@gmail.com>> wrote:
> >>
> >>> Hi all
> >>>
> >>> This document should address all the comments except this one:
> >>>
> >>> G.- Move sections 16 (Mobility Considerations), 17 (xTR Placement 
> >>> Considerations), 18 (Traceroute Consideration) to a new OAM document
> >>>
> >>> The authors would like to have a better understanding of where this text 
> >>> will go.
> >>
> >> Right, we concluded to not remove the valuable text.
> >
> > Nobody wants to lose valuable text.
> 
> Glad you feel that way.
> 
> >
> >> A lot of time and thought went into writing it and we didn’t want to lose 
> >> it. There was no where that was agreed upon to put it.
> >
> > That is not accurate. There was clear indication to move it to a new OAM 
> > document, without any change in the text.
> > Purpose was to have just a different placeholder that make more sense.
> > This is an half an hour task.
> 
> But there was also concerns about slowing the process down. And the 
> co-authors (Albert and I) don’t think it should move from RFC6833.
> 
> So there isn’t concensus. And I don’t believe it is even rough concensus.
> 
> >
> >>
> >> So since we felt there was no concensus on Sections 16-18, we didn’t make 
> >> any change.
> >
> > Again not accurate, please spend half an hour to create the OAM document.
> > If you do not have time we can appoint other editors for the task. 
> > Authorship will be anyway preserved.
> 
> 
> Section 16 is “Mobility Considerations” that discusses various forms of how 
> EIDs can change RLOCs. And it sets up for different designs that are already 
> documented in various documents. But Mobility certainly shouldn’t go in an 
> OAM document.
> 
> Section 17 discusses where xTRs (data-plane boxes) should reside in the 
> network. And sets up for a more detail discussion which is in the Deployment 
> RFC.
> 
> Section 18 is “Traceroute Considerations”, this arguably can go into an OAM 
> document. But it would be 3 pages. And then one would argue there are other 
> OAM mechanisms spread across LISP documents that could go in an OAM document.
> 
> This will not take 1/2 hour.
> 
> And I’m finding it hard to see the value in doing all this busy work. We have 
> already accomplished separating data-plane text from control-plane text. We 
> achieved that goal from the charter.
> 
> Dino
> 
> 

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