Thanks for youre review Mahesh. > On Aug 6, 2024, at 4:49 PM, Mahesh Jethanandani via Datatracker > <nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > > Section 9.1, paragraph 2 >> hat plan to switch to using a reliable transport to hold registrations first >> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply > "reliable transport". > > Section 9.2, paragraph 1 >> m is distributed, the ETR requires to have one specific mapping ready to be r >> ^^^^^^^ > Did you mean "having"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, > "require" + "to" takes an object, usually a pronoun. > > Section 9.2, paragraph 1 >> hat they can switch to using a reliable transport. This can also lead to gene >> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply > "reliable transport". > > Section 9.2, paragraph 4 >> unnel Router (RTRs) as they appear in an locator-set. 9.4. DNs for Self-Docu >> ^^ > Use "a" instead of "an" if the following word doesn't start with a vowel > sound, > e.g. "a sentence", "a university".
I will fix all of the above. Thanks, Dino _______________________________________________ lisp mailing list -- lisp@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to lisp-le...@ietf.org
