Document: draft-ietf-lisp-geo
Title: LISP Geo-Coordinates
Reviewer: Tim Wicinski
Review result: Ready

Reviewer: Tim Wicinski
Review Result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-lisp-geo-12
Reviewer: Tim Wicinski
Intended Status: Experimental


In the IANA Considerations, the second paragrapgh in this section should be 
moved
after the table. For example:


   Following the guidelines of [RFC8126], IANA is asked to assign a
   value (17 is suggested) for the Geo-Coordinates LCAF from the "LISP
   Canonical Address Format (LCAF) Types" registry (defined in [RFC8060]
   as follows:

   +=========+=====================+============================+
   | Value # | LISP LCAF Type Name |         Reference          |
   +=========+=====================+============================+
   |   17    |   Geo-Location      | [This Document], Section 5 |
   +---------+---------------------+----------------------------+

          Table 1: Geo-Location LCAF Type Assignment

   This document updates the format of LCAF Type value 5 in
   [RFC8060], IANA is asked to mark type value 5 as "Deprecated".

--

RFC8060 doesn't really mention how to deal with deprecated entries to the 
registry, I suggest some slight changes to the text here. 





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