Thanks Activity Workshop,
I've applied your changes into what will become the next version of the
presentation at:
https://svn.osgeo.org/osgeo/livedvd/gisvm/trunk/doc/en/presentation
(It is still missing some of the images)
I haven't yet changed OSGeoLive <-> OSGeo-Live. It seems we use both
syntaxes about 50% each in the docs. I have a mild preference for
OSGeoLive, but am ok with OSGeo-Live if that is the common feeling.
On 04/09/13 05:56, Activity Workshop wrote:
> With or without [-] will not cause confusion or change the
dissemination of our good name.
You're right, but I still think that the name of the thing is
important. Keeping it consistent isn't that hard. Then people who
want to refer to this great thing aren't in doubt about what it's
called. live.osgeo.org uses a - consistently (apart from the logo),
and the rest of the notes appear to use a - consistently.
> This OSGeoLive Lightening Overview
It's Lightning, not Lightening. It's Lightning, not Lightening.
> help increase the awareness and uptake of the breath of quality
GeoSpatial Open Source
Did you mean "the BREADTH of quality Geospatial Open Source
[software]" ? How do you increase the uptake of the breadth of
software? I just don't get this sentence.
> Lets start by ...
Let's
> OpenLayers is provides an extensive set
OpenLayers provides an extensive set...
> All functionally runs inside the web browser
All functionality?
> the Information Centre for the Environment at the University of
California, Davis
the Information CENTER for the Environment at the University of
California (I did wonder whether "Davis" was another organisation in
that comma-separated list, rather than the location of the ICE)
Yes I know these are only notes for the speaker, not a published text,
but still, it might as well be right. And it's a lot easier to
translate something which is correct rather than spend time wondering
what was meant. And you did ask for feedback ;)
Hope that helps!
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