Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-extensions-24: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-extensions/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for the work everyone has put into this document. I have only a small number of minor comments. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §2.4: > o 1 octet of RESERVED For the sake of making this byte potentially usable in the future, consider adding text specifying something like "MUST be set to 0 on transmission, and MUST be ignored on reception." --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §2.4.6: > 10.1.1/24, Prefix-SID: Index 51 > 10.1.2/24, Prefix-SID: Index 52 > 10.1.3/24, Prefix-SID: Index 53 > 10.1.4/24, Prefix-SID: Index 54 > 10.1.5/24, Prefix-SID: Index 55 > 10.1.6/24, Prefix-SID: Index 56 > 10.1.7/24, Prefix-SID: Index 57 Please change these addresses to ranges reserved by IANA for documentation purposes rather than those reserved for private use. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §2.4.6: > 2001:DB8:1/48, Prefix-SID: Index 151 > 2001:DB8:2/48, Prefix-SID: Index 152 > 2001:DB8:3/48, Prefix-SID: Index 153 > 2001:DB8:4/48, Prefix-SID: Index 154 Please change these IPv6 addresses to use lowercase hex digits. See https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5952#section-4.3 _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list Lsr@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
