>> Nits: >> >> Section 3.2.3: The lettered paragraphs at the top of the section >> begin with lower case letters, but the lettered paragraphs at the >> top of the section begin with upper case letters. Please be >> consistent. >> > [Les:] Done
Cool. >> Section 3.2.3: s/time after which the adjacency will now expire/ >> /time after which the adjacency will expire/ >> > [Les:] I left this unchanged. The text is identical to text in Section 3.2.1 > regarding the RA bit. The point of using "now expire" is to emphasize that > the expiration time has been adjusted as a result of the RR/PR request. > Hope this is OK with you. Sure. That makes sense. >> Section 3.2.3 says: >> >> ... It >> is therefore useful to signal a planned restart (if the forwarding >> plane on the restarting router is maintained) so that ... >> >> I suggest: >> >> ... If >> the forwarding plane on the restarting router is maintained, it >> is useful to signal a planned restart so that ... > > [Les:] I rewrote this paragraph. The term "restart" has been defined in > Section 2 to be associated with a control plane restart which involves > maintenance of the forwarding plane - so some of the text was redundant. > I hope the revised text is both more readable and more precise. I just fetched the -05 version. The revised paragraph looks good to me. Russ _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list Lsr@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
