Hi Eric,

Thanks for your review and please check inline below for 
response/clarifications.

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Subject: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on 
draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-originator-10: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-originator-10: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for the work put into this document. Easy to see the added value for 
trouble shooting !

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be 
appreciated).

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

Thanks for fixing Warren Kumari's question in the latest -10.

-- Section 1 --
Is the reference to RFC 5329 correct ? I fail to see the link of TE with this 
document.
[KT] The reference to RFC5329 is required since it is the one that specified 
the "IPv6 Router Address" for OSPFv3 
(https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5329#section-3) which is semantically 
equivalent to what this document is specifying for usage in the Prefix Source 
Router Address Sub-TLV for OSPFv3. 

Should it be made clearer that the OSPFv3 router ID is a 32-bit value hence 
cannot be used in an IPv6-only network ? "it does not necessarily represent a 
reachable address for the router" is slightly ambiguous.
[KT] The point was that even for OSPFv2, it does not have to represent a 
reachable IPv4 address of the router. For OSPFv3, this is obviously not so too. 
Ack - will fix in the next update.

-- Section 2.2 --
Thanks for fixing Warren Kumari's question in the latest -10.

-- Section 4 --
Suggestion: made the sentence "A rogue node that can inject prefix..." in a 
separate paragraph.
[KT] Ack - will update in the next version.

Thanks,
Ketan



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