Hi Dhruv, Thanks for your support and comments. We’ll address these in the next revision.
Thanks, Acee From: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.i...@gmail.com> Date: Friday, June 24, 2022 at 1:30 AM To: Christian Hopps <cho...@chopps.org> Cc: "lsr@ietf.org" <lsr@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminol...@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminol...@ietf.org>, "lsr-...@ietf.org" <lsr-...@ietf.org>, "lsr-cha...@ietf.org" <lsr-cha...@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG last call for draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-00 Resent-From: <alias-boun...@ietf.org> Resent-To: Acee Lindem <a...@cisco.com>, <mj...@us.ibm.com>, <aret...@futurewei.com> Resent-Date: Friday, June 24, 2022 at 1:30 AM Hi WG, I support progressing this towards publication. Some comments - - The header and main body claim that 7 RFCs are being updated whereas the abstract and introduction only cite two. - It is good to add an informational reference for inclusive language in the introduction -- may be NISTIR8366 (which is referred to in the IESG statement on inclusive language) Thanks! Dhruv On Sun, Jun 5, 2022 at 3:25 PM Christian Hopps <cho...@chopps.org<mailto:cho...@chopps.org>> wrote: Given the simplicity of this document and having received no objections or edits prior to or during the adoption call we'll be moving it immediately to WGLC... This begins a 2 week WG Last Call, ending Jun 19th, 2022, for: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology/ Authors, Please indicate to the list, your knowledge of any IPR related to this work. Thanks, Chris. _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list Lsr@ietf.org<mailto:Lsr@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
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