This looks right. If there are any objections to verifying it, please let me know.
—John > On Sep 1, 2022, at 2:39 PM, RFC Errata System <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> > wrote: > > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC2328, > "OSPF Version 2". > > -------------------------------------- > You may review the report below and at: > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7112__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!FJynD-y4c4yWDb91yTvFViobefnoM7wxDCIcBMiV4r0jFG8WE4jsCzW7xMBABvx2TwtPDHYBucjBuYoTMPupgw$ > > -------------------------------------- > Type: Editorial > Reported by: Renato Westphal <renatowestp...@gmail.com> > > Section: 10.2 > > Original Text > ------------- > NegotiationDone > The Master/Slave relationship has been negotiated, and DD > sequence numbers have been exchanged. This signals the > start of the sending/receiving of Database Description > packets. For more information on the generation of this > event, consult Section 10.8. > > Corrected Text > -------------- > NegotiationDone > The Master/Slave relationship has been negotiated, and DD > sequence numbers have been exchanged. This signals the > start of the sending/receiving of Database Description > packets. For more information on the generation of this > event, consult Section 10.6. > > Notes > ----- > The generation of the NegotiationDone event is specified in Section 10.6 (not > Section 10.8). > > Instructions: > ------------- > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. > > -------------------------------------- > RFC2328 (no draft string recorded) > -------------------------------------- > Title : OSPF Version 2 > Publication Date : April 1998 > Author(s) : J. Moy > Category : INTERNET STANDARD > Source : Open Shortest Path First IGP > Area : Routing > Stream : IETF > Verifying Party : IESG _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list Lsr@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr