Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Ready The document is written in a clear and concise manner. The authors have done an excellent job of making a difficult subject clear and readable.
Two technical sections should be checked against implementations of IS-IS with dense flooding (section 6.6.2.1 and section 6.6.2.2. I am not implementing so this check is beyond my capabilities. Editorial nit: section 3, requirement 3, sentence 2. "Just addressing a complete bipartite topology such as K5, 8 is insufficient." An informative reference to K5,8 or a bipartite topology might be helpful to readers. This is an optional editorial comment. _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list Lsr@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
