Reviewer: Dirk Von Hugo
Review result: Ready with Nits

the document updates LSR/OSPF documents to inclusive language replacing
Master/Slave by Leader/Follower terminology. No technical errors or need for
further clarification were found. Only two very minor nits have been detected:
Page 4: Section 2.4.,first => Section 2.4., first Page 5:  OSPPFv3 Router-LSAs
=>  OSPFv3 Router-LSAs

Thanks for the work to authors and other reviewers!
Best regards
Dirk


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