Hello All,

I've reviewed both an earlier and the latest versions of this draft. I
support its publication as this is a very useful extension - especially
association of tags with intra/inter area prefixes has been missing.

Some nits/editorial comments:

1) Suggest removing the sentence referencing the equivalent ISIS RFC from
the abstract.

2) Section 1: s/considered but discard/considered but discarded

3) Section 2:

OLD:
      Length   A 16-bit field that indicates the length of the value
portion in octets and MUST be a multiple of 4 octets dependent on the
number of administrative tags advertised. At least one administrative tag
must be advertised.

NEW:
      Length   A 16-bit field that indicates the length of the
value portion in octets dependent on the number of administrative
tags advertised. It MUST be a multiple of 4 octets and at least one
administrative tag MUST be advertised.

4) Section 3: suggest to change from numbered list to bullet list for
better readability.

Thanks,
Ketan


On Tue, Jun 18, 2024 at 12:15 AM Christian Hopps <cho...@chopps.org> wrote:

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