Sorry I was too quick in responding :-) Now that I had coffee, I'm in favor of this WG draft becoming an Informational RFC.
Giving it a last browse, I have the following suggestions - Section 2: "economically" -> "economically" - Section 2.1, regarding the multiple facets: "- constraints on the maximum code size (ROM/Flash);", ..., "- constraints on the available electrical power". Do we want to mention CPU computational power as a possible constraint? RAM size is usually a limit before CPU power nowaday, but who knows. - Section 2.2.1: what about explicating the MSL acronym as done for DTN in the following paragraph. I assume TCP does not need explicating. - Section 3: Ki is not a standard prefix notation. K has traditionally been used for 1024 even though it is the SI unit for temperature. What about writing "kilobytes" in extenso, there seems to be room in the table anyway. That's it folks Dominique -----Message d'origine----- De : [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] De la part de [email protected] Envoyé : lundi 8 avril 2013 14:19 À : Cao Zhen (CZ); [email protected] Objet : Re: [Lwip] WGLC for lwig-terminology I'm in favor of this document becoming a WG draft. It is useful to have a common langage and references we can point newcomers to. Dominique -----Message d'origine----- De : [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] De la part de Cao Zhen (CZ) Envoyé : dimanche 7 avril 2013 10:23 À : [email protected] Objet : [Lwip] WGLC for lwig-terminology ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------ Dear All, Discussion of lwig-terminology appears to have completed. The authors think this document is ready for working-group last call. This is a two-week working-group last call for draft-ietf-lwig-terminology, for publication as an informational RFC. The working group last call ends at _April 20_ Please send your reviews and comments to the mailing list. If you have reviewed the document, please do indicate whether you think it should go forward. Thanks and regards, Co-chairs _______________________________________________ Lwip mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lwip _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, France Telecom - Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, France Telecom - Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. _______________________________________________ Lwip mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lwip _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, France Telecom - Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, France Telecom - Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. _______________________________________________ Lwip mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lwip
