made a few fixes. A couple "version 1.0" bugs. (e.g., "we'll try to fix this
by version 1.0"). I wrote "1.1" for a later version. Was I supposed to write
"1.2"? Or should I have written "in a later version"? The good news is that a
grep for 1.0 and 0.12 didn't yield any other obvious version
bugs in any of the docs.

Also Englishized the Layout file chapter. Jean-Marc, could you
make sure I didn't break anything?

Also, Jean-Marc, didn't you get rid of \protect commands? If so, you can
remove the NeedProtect description from that chapter.

I'm attaching a diff, since I don't have (or want :) cvs access.


While we're talking about docs, whatever happened to the doc team? Mike is
working hard, but I haven't seen any posts from others. It's important that
the docs for the 1.0 release are as correct, clear, and complete as possible.
For example, customization.lyx has a note from john weiss that says:

     The following section is by Ivan Schreter.
     It needs to be fixed to conform to the new Documentation Style sheet and
     to make use of the new v1.0 features.
     The whole thing also needs to be merged with the section following it.

Is there any chance that someone with a good knowledge of the International
stuff could do this? I think a lot of the questions we get on the list are
related to internationalization issues, which are definitely complicated. It
would be great if the internationalization docs could be made correct,
clear, and complete.

So, is anyone else from the doc team out there? Do any of you have time to
work on things? John Weiss said he's working on updating the slides docs and
hopes to have those done before 1.0. José, have you documented the sgml stuff
you did for 1.0, or are the old docs still correct? (I don't really know what
you did) What else needs to be done, and who can do it? As usual, I'm willing
to Englishize things, but don't really have time to write new docs.

-Amir
--- CVS/lyxdoc/Customization.lyx        Tue Dec 15 12:16:28 1998
+++ Customization.lyx   Tue Dec 15 13:04:12 1998
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-#This file was created by <lasgoutt> Tue Dec  1 12:31:21 1998
+#This file was created by <karger> Tue Dec 15 13:04:12 1998
 #LyX 1.0 (C) 1995-1998 Matthias Ettrich and the LyX Team
 \lyxformat 2.15
 \textclass book
@@ -1759,7 +1759,7 @@
  If you are lucky enough to have that.
 \layout Standard
 
-In LyX version 1.0, we will try to support the 
+In LyX version 1.1, we will try to support the 
 \family typewriter 
 T1Lib
 \family default 
@@ -2475,10 +2475,10 @@
  Also, you will find that some of the translations do not define short-cut
  keys for everything.
  Sometimes, there are simply not enough free letters to do it.
- Other times, the translator just haven't got around to doing it yet.
+ Other times, the translator just hasn't got around to doing it yet.
 \layout Standard
 
-We'll try to fix these shortcomings in LyX version 1.0.
+We'll try to fix these shortcomings in LyX version 1.1.
 \layout Section
 
 Selecting an alternative language for the user interface
@@ -4188,11 +4188,11 @@
 
 \layout Standard
 
-This section describes the LyX textclass format for a LyX 1.0.
+This section describes the LyX textclass format for LyX 1.0.
  Later versions of LyX will possibly support an enhanced format.
 \layout Standard
 
-This is no tutorial but a short reference.
+This is not a tutorial, but a short reference.
  When you plan to realize a new textclass, it might be very helpful to look
  at the example textclasses contributed with LyX.
  If you use a nice LaTeX textclass that might be of interest for others,
@@ -4257,7 +4257,7 @@
 #
 \family default 
  are comments.
- There is one exception to this rule: all textclass file should begin with
+ There is one exception to this rule: all textclass files should begin with
  lines like:
 \layout LyX-Code
 
@@ -4380,7 +4380,7 @@
 
 
 \size small 
-#% Do not delete the line below; configure depends on this 
+#% Do not delete the line below; configure depends on this
 \newline 
 # 
 \backslash 
@@ -4393,7 +4393,7 @@
 \backslash 
 DeclareSGMLClass
 \family default 
- can also be given an optional paramter declaring the name of the documnt
+ can also be given an optional paramter declaring the name of the document
  class (but not a list).
 \layout Standard
 
@@ -4437,7 +4437,7 @@
 \emph default 
 , 2
 \family default 
-] Wether the class-default should have or two columns.
+] Whether the class-default should have or two columns.
  Can be changed in the 
 \family sans 
 \bar under 
@@ -4468,7 +4468,7 @@
 \emph default 
 , 2
 \family default 
-] Wether the class-default should be printing on one or both sides of the
+] Whether the class-default should be printing on one or both sides of the
  paper.
  Can be changed in the 
 \family sans 
@@ -4611,8 +4611,8 @@
 Input
 \family default 
 \series default 
- As its name implies, this command allows to input another textclass definition
- file to avoid duplicating commands.
+ As its name implies, this command allows one to input another textclass
+ definition file to avoid duplicating commands.
  Most standard textclass files, for example, input 
 \family typewriter 
 stdclass.inc
@@ -4626,7 +4626,7 @@
 NoStyle
 \family default 
 \series default 
- This command delete an existing style.
+ This command deletes an existing style.
  This is particularly useful when you want to suppress a layout that has
  be defined in an input file.
 \layout Section
@@ -4775,7 +4775,7 @@
 \emph default 
 , Manual, Dynamic, First_Dynamic, Right_Address_Box
 \family default 
-] The kind of margin the layout has on the left side.
+] The kind of margin that the layout has on the left side.
  
 \family typewriter 
 Static
@@ -4842,7 +4842,7 @@
 \family default 
  means the margin is chosen in a way that the longest row of this paragraph
  fits to the right margin.
- Used to typeset an address on the very right of a paper.
+ Used to typeset an address on the very right of the page.
 \layout Description
 
 
@@ -4905,7 +4905,7 @@
 \family typewriter 
 Item_Environment
 \family default 
- is the same than 
+ is the same as 
 \family typewriter 
 Environment
 \family default 
@@ -4920,7 +4920,7 @@
 \family typewriter 
 List_Environment
 \family default 
- is the same than 
+ is the same as 
 \family typewriter 
 Item_Environment
 \family default 
@@ -5041,24 +5041,25 @@
 the
 \family default 
  normal font.
- This way was chosen that the look is the same with each used screen font.
+ This way was chosen so that the look is the same with each used screen
+ font.
  The 
 \family typewriter 
 Parindent
 \family default 
- will be fix for a certain layout.
- The exception is standard layout, since the indentation of a standard layout
+ will be fixed for a certain layout.
+ The exception is Standard layout, since the indentation of a Standard layout
  paragraph can be prohibited with 
 \family typewriter 
 NextNoIndent
 \family default 
 .
- Also standard layout paragraphs inside environments use the 
+ Also, Standard layout paragraphs inside environments use the 
 \family typewriter 
 Parindent
 \family default 
  of the environment, not their native one.
- For example standard paragraphs inside an enumeration are not indented.
+ For example Standard paragraphs inside an enumeration are not indented.
 \layout Description
 
 
@@ -5124,7 +5125,7 @@
 DefaultHeight()
 \family default 
  is the height of a row with the normal font.
- So the look stays the same with different screen fonts.
+ This way, the look stays the same with different screen fonts.
 \layout Description
 
 
@@ -5137,9 +5138,9 @@
 \family typewriter 
 float=0
 \family default 
-] The vertical space the very first of a chain of paragraphs with this layout
- is separated from the previous one.
- If the previous paragraph has another layout, the separations are not simple
+] The vertical space with which the very first of a chain of paragraphs
+ with this layout is separated from the previous paragraph.
+ If the previous paragraph has another layout, the separations are not simply
  added, but the maximum is taken.
 \layout Description
 
@@ -5157,7 +5158,7 @@
 \family typewriter 
 TopSep
 \family default 
- for the very last one.
+ for the very last paragraph.
 \layout Description
 
 
@@ -5184,7 +5185,7 @@
 float=0
 \family default 
 ] This is an extra space between the paragraphs of an environment layout.
- If you put other layouts into an environment, each are separated with the
+ If you put other layouts into an environment, each is separated with the
  environment's 
 \family typewriter 
 Parsep
@@ -5383,11 +5384,12 @@
 \family typewriter 
 string=""
 \family default 
-] The string used a label in 
+] The string used for a label with a 
 \family typewriter 
 Static
 \family default 
- labeltypes.When the border is 
+ labeltype.
+ When the border is 
 \family typewriter 
 Manual
 \family default 
@@ -5430,7 +5432,7 @@
 \emph default 
 , left, right, center
 \family default 
-] 
+] Paragraph alignment.
 \layout Description
 
 
@@ -5540,7 +5542,7 @@
 \emph default 
 ,1
 \family default 
-] Tell whether fragile commands in this layout should be 
+] Whether fragile commands in this layout should be 
 \family typewriter 
 
 \backslash 
@@ -5562,7 +5564,7 @@
 1
 \family default 
 \emph default 
-] Wether newlines are translated into LaTeX newlines (
+] Whether newlines are translated into LaTeX newlines (
 \family typewriter 
 
 \backslash 
@@ -5589,16 +5591,16 @@
 \emph default 
 , 1
 \family default 
-] Usually LyX doesn't allow to insert more than one blank between words,
- since a blank is considered as the separation between two words, not a
+] Usually LyX doesn't allow you to insert more than one space between words,
+ since a space is considered as the separation between two words, not a
  character or symbol of its own.
  This is a very fine thing but sometimes annoying, for example when typing
  program code or plain LaTeX code.
- For this reason 
+ For this reason, 
 \family typewriter 
 FreeSpacing
 \family default 
- could be enabled.
+ can be enabled.
  Note that LyX will create protected blanks for the additional blanks when
  in another mode than LaTeX-mode.
 \layout Description
@@ -5616,7 +5618,7 @@
 \emph default 
 , 1
 \family default 
-] Usually LyX does not allow to leave a paragraph empty, since it would
+] Usually LyX does not allow you to leave a paragraph empty, since it would
  lead to empty LaTeX output.
  There are some cases where this could be desirable however: in a letter
  template, the required fields can be provided as empty fields, so that
@@ -5893,12 +5895,12 @@
 \layout Standard
 
 Templates are created just like usual documents.
- The only difference is, that usual documents contain all possible setting,
+ The only difference is that usual documents contain all possible settings,
  including the fontscheme and the papersize.
- Usually a user don't want a template to overwrite his defaults in these
+ Usually a user doesn't want a template to overwrite his defaults in these
  cases.
- For that reason the designer of a template should remove the corresponding
- lyx-commands like 
+ For that reason, the designer of a template should remove the corresponding
+ commands like 
 \family typewriter 
 
 \backslash 
@@ -5910,7 +5912,7 @@
 \backslash 
 papersize
 \family default 
- from the template lyx-file.
+ from the template LyX file.
  This can be done with any simple text-editor, for example 
 \family typewriter 
 vi

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