Here some further proposed updates. I am sure some of them will lead to
lively debate ;-)

- Martin

Index: about/index.php
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/local/lyx/cvsroot/www-user/about/index.php,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -p -r1.1 index.php
--- about/index.php	19 Sep 2005 13:09:05 -0000	1.1
+++ about/index.php	9 Jan 2006 13:38:15 -0000
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ include("start.php"); 
    <dt><a href="i18n.php">Internationalization</a> </dt>
        <dd>LyX in languages other than English </dd>
    <dt><a href="license.php">The LyX License</a> </dt>
-       <dd> LyX is released under a slightly modified GPL </dd>
+       <dd> LyX is released under the GPL, version 2 (or later) </dd>
    <dt><a href="klyx.php">LyX vs. KLyX</a> </dt>
        <dd>Is KLyX the same as LyX? </dd>
    <dt><a href="press.php">Press about LyX</a> </dt>
Index: about/intro.php
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/local/lyx/cvsroot/www-user/about/intro.php,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -p -r1.1 intro.php
--- about/intro.php	19 Sep 2005 13:09:05 -0000	1.1
+++ about/intro.php	9 Jan 2006 13:38:15 -0000
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@ include("start.php"); 
 ?>
 
 <p>LyX is an advanced open source document processor running on many Unix
+and some non-Unix
 platforms. It is called a "document processor", because unlike standard 
 word processors, LyX encourages an approach to writing based on the 
 structure of your documents, not their appearance. LyX lets you 
@@ -24,17 +25,18 @@ With LyX, short notes or letters are a s
 when composing complex documents like technical documentation, doctoral 
 theses and conference proceedings.
 </p><p>
-The 1.0 release offers extensive control over fonts, margins, headers/footers, 
+LyX offers extensive control over fonts, margins, headers/footers,
 spacing/indents, justification, bullet types in multilevel lists, a 
 sophisticated table editor, an emacs-style version control interface for 
-collaborative projects -- the list goes on and on. LyX 1.0 includes many 
+collaborative projects, basic change tracking, 'branching' for parallel
+document versions -- the list goes on and on. The package includes many 
 standard formats and templates -- e.g. for letters, articles, books, 
 overheads, even Hollywood scripts. Work continues on a growing library of 
 "plug-in" formats and templates, in the best open-source tradition.
 </p><p>
 LyX presents the user with the familiar face of a WYSIWYG word processor. 
 However, users familiar with Microsoft Word or WordPerfect may be 
-perplexed by certain basic LyX behavior. For example, repeatedly hitting 
+perplexed by certain basic LyX behaviour. For example, repeatedly hitting 
 the space bar has no effect! This is by design: LyX puts in the proper 
 spacing for you, intelligently. Welcome to the LyX paradigm! 
 </p><p>
@@ -52,12 +54,13 @@ multi-level outlines, formatted tables o
 illustrations, and exhaustive indices or bibliographies, and is rightly 
 famous for the superb quality of its output. Users already acquainted 
 with "raw" LaTeX will find that LyX offers full LaTeX transparency and 
-import/export of LaTeX documents.
+export of LaTeX documents. Import of LaTeX is trickier, but works well for
+non-weird documents.
 </p><p>
 LyX contains a fully integrated formula editor which is easily 
 best-of-breed, adding WYSIWYG point-and-click convenience to LaTeX's 
 legendary math typesetting capabilities. If you're into scientific 
-authoring, this is the jewel in the crown. TRY IT!
+authoring, this is the jewel in the crown. <strong>Try it</strong>!
 </p><p>
 
 Think of LyX as the first WYSIWYM word processor: What You See Is What 
@@ -82,36 +85,36 @@ couple of page previews using xdvi or gh
 </p><p>
 LyX includes excellent and copious on-line help -- a beginner's tutorial, 
 user's guide, and additional manuals describing advanced features.  LyX's 
-menu system exists in a dozen different (Latin character set) languages, 
-selectable at run time.
+menu system exists in a score of different (mostly Latin character set)
+languages, selectable at run time.
 
 </p><p>
 LyX conspicuously lacks a filter for importing MS Word documents. The 
 LyX Team considers this not worth the effort, as word processors in 
 general are moving away from proprietary formats to the open XML 
 standard. So, as long as you need continued access to legacy documents, 
-you should retain a traditional word processor, e.g., Corel's WordPerfect 
-for Linux.
+you should retain a traditional word processor, e.g., Open Office 
+(Windows, Mac or Linux), for which a LaTeX export module exists. Occasional
+import of small amounts of text works best through cut &amp; paste.
 
 </p><p>
 LyX runs on standard Unix platforms, including Linux, FreeBSD, NetBSD, 
-Solaris, IRIX, HP-UX, AIX, ..., even OS/2 and Cygnus/Win32 (somewhat 
-experimentally), and provides native support for PostScript&reg; fonts 
-and figures. 
+Solaris, IRIX, HP-UX, AIX, Mac OS-X..., even and Cygnus/Win32 and Windows
+native (somewhat experimentally), and provides native support for
+PostScript&reg; fonts and figures, as well as PDF figures and output. 
 </p>
 
 <h2>About the LyX Team</h2>
 <p>
 The LyX Team is a world wide consortium of volunteer contributors. Many, 
-many people have helped make the 1.0 release possible, including:
-</p><p>
-      Lars Gullik Bjoennes, Alejandro Aguilar Sierra, Asger Alstrup,
-      Jean-Marc Lasgouttes, Juergen Vigna, John P. Weiss, Bernhard 
-      Iselborn, Andre Spiegel, Allan Rae, Henner Zeller, Robert van
-      der Kamp, David L. Johnson, Amir Karger, Joacim Persson, Peter 
-      Suetterlin, SMiyata, Alkis Polyzotis, ...
-</p><p>
-Special thanks should go to Matthias Ettrich who started it all. </p>
+many people have helped through time to make the various LyX releases
+possible. See the full <a href="credits.php">Credits</a> list. A special
+mention only of the "eminences grises" of LyX, Lars Gullik Bj&oslash;nnes
+and Jean-Marc Lasgouttes.
+</p>
+<p>
+...and special thanks should also go to Matthias Ettrich who started it all!
+</p>
 
 <hr />
  <p>Most of the above was taken from the <a href="LyX_1.0_PR.html">LyX 1.0 Press
Index: about/license.php
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/local/lyx/cvsroot/www-user/about/license.php,v
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -p -r1.2 license.php
--- about/license.php	1 Jan 2006 23:22:10 -0000	1.2
+++ about/license.php	9 Jan 2006 13:38:15 -0000
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Gnu General Public Licence</a>, version 
 </p>
 
 <p>
-<a href="credits.php">Contributers</a> of code to the LyX project are
+<a href="credits.php">Contributors</a> of code to the LyX project are
 required to post a message to the
 <a href="mailto:[email protected]">lyx-devel</a> mailing
 list, stating that they grant permission to licence their contributions
Index: about/press.php
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/local/lyx/cvsroot/www-user/about/press.php,v
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -p -r1.3 press.php
--- about/press.php	19 Sep 2005 13:48:13 -0000	1.3
+++ about/press.php	9 Jan 2006 13:38:15 -0000
@@ -21,9 +21,6 @@ include("start.php"); 
 
       <ul>
 
-      <li>A <a href="http://www.unix-open.de/O/151/Y/83592/VI/2520978/default.aspx";>
-      Unix Open</a> article in german titled "LyX: Frontend f&uuml;r TeX und LaTeX".</li>
- 
       <li>A <a href="http://www.linuxplanet.com/linuxplanet/reviews/3871/1/";>
       Linux Planet</a> article covering LyX, and featuring short interviews
       with LyX developers.</li>
@@ -40,7 +37,7 @@ include("start.php"); 
 
       <li>The english <a
       href="http://www.linuxuser.co.uk/";>LinuxUser</a> paper magazine
-      had an column on LyX in its February 2001 issue, which is now
+      had a column on LyX in its February 2001 issue, which is now
       <a href="http://www.linuxuser.co.uk/images/stories/pdf/lu7-Soapbox-See_what_you_mean.pdf";>online</a>.</li>
 
       <li><a href="http://www.northernjourney.com/opensource/newbies/newb020.html";>This article</a>
@@ -121,7 +118,13 @@ include("start.php"); 
       <li><a href="http://www.zx81.org.uk/computing/linux/tps/lyx.html";>
       LyX - review by Stephen Darlington</a> - a review of LyX v0.12.0
       </li>
-
+      <li><a href="http://www.troubleshooters.com/linux/lyx/";>Writing Self-Published Books with Lyx</a> by Steve Litt, 2001
+      </li>
+      <li><a href="http://www.troubleshooters.com/lpm/200210/200210.htm";>LyX Quickstart </a> by Steve Litt, 2002
+      </li>
+      <li><a href="http://www.newsforge.com/article.pl?sid=04/09/15/1345248";>Hot
+      LyX</a> by Dave Fancella, 2004
+      </li>
       </ul>
 
 <?php 

Attachment: signature.asc
Description: This is a digitally signed message part

Reply via email to