I would delete this paragraph: The election has 4 steps - first, you must identify yourself using the voting token above. Then select your preferred candidates in order of preference. A third step will show you your choice, and ask you to confirm or return to the previous step. Finally, after confirming your choice, a unique identifier will be given to you which will allow you to verify after the election that your vote was counted correctly. To ensure anonymity, no link will be kept between this token and your identifiers, so please keep this token safe.
And tell them what they're doing right WHEN they're doing it. First reading: oh, four long steps... that's too much... bye bye potentional voter... 2010/3/17 Dave Neary <[email protected]> > Hi all, > > I've had to "do a mulligan" on election email instructions in the past, and > have gotten some comments that the instructions were sub-optimal. > > Could people give me some feedback on the following instructions email, > please? > > > http://vcs.maemo.org/svn/maemo2midgard/maemo-elections/scripts/instructions.txt > > Possible criticisms & the trade-offs involved: > * It'd be nice to have a list of candidates, but that does make the mail a > lot longer > * Electioninstructions are OK, I think - does anyone have suggestions for > improvement? > * Including candidacy statements: Not a fan. If listing the candidates > makes the email long, then including declarations makes it too long. > > Any other bits of feedback or suggestions, or is this good to send out next > weekend? > > Cheers, > Dave. > _______________________________________________ > maemo-community mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.maemo.org/mailman/listinfo/maemo-community >
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