Sorry for top posting. I'm agree with your description!
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From: "Johnny A. Solbu" <coo...@solbu.net>
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Date: Fri, 2 Dec 2011 16:45:57 
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        mercurial-2.0.1-1.mga2

On Friday 02 December 2011 16:34, cazzaniga.san...@gmail.com wrote:
> Description :
> Mercurial is a fast, lightweight source control management system
> designed for efficient handling of very large distributed projects.

In my opinion, this is enough. (Note that I moved the last word up to the end 
of the previous line.)
If people really are interested in reading the features they can look at the 
projects homepage.

Everything from "Major features include:" and all "bullet points" should be 
dropped.

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