On Friday, March 30, 2012 09:38:27 AM Barry Leiba wrote:
> > How about:
> > 
> > Mail operators MUST be able to receive and process reports formatted per
> > [RFC5965] as email messages ([RFC5322]) over SMTP ([RFC5321]). These and
> > other types of email messages that can be received are discussed in
> > Section 4.2 of [RFC6449].
> 
> I don't know.  I think the fact that Scott couldn't come up with text, and
> that your attempt is a bit weak, speak to this sentence not using 2119 text
> (and note that that does NOT make it "non-normative").  Maybe just
> something like, "[reports covered in this draft] are formatted per ARF
> [RFC5965] as email messages [RFC5322] over SMTP [RFC5321]."
> 
> (BTW, the use of bare citations to double as text is what's causing you to
> do the siilly "([RFCxxxx])" thing sometimes.  Just say no, please.)

I like that one best (Barry's), but either is fin.

Scott K
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