Joachim Noreiko wrote: > --- Thomas Wood <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > >> Andreas and I have been working on improving the >> "Why choose GNOME" >> leaflet for the upcoming LinuxWorld Expo in London, >> UK. So far, we have >> come up with the following draft: >> <http://ramnet.se/~nisse/diverse/temp/whygnome.pdf>. >> >> We're now looking for comments on the text to make >> it more fun and >> interesting. It's probably worth noting the >> prospective audience will >> probably be IT managers and small developers. >> > > "for end-users, users, " ? (first para) > > I'd indent the paragraphs with smaller icons so the > left margin of all text lines up. > > That's the proofreading. Not sure about the fun part. You mean line up with the logo? - Andreas
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