> How's this look? > > http://www.gnome.org/~shaunm/notes2-20/index.html This looks great! Thanks for all the hard work that has gone into producing this page.
If you are interested, some areas for improvement are listed below. "GNOME 2.20 includes all of the improvements made in GNOME 2.12 " Do we mean GNOME 2.12 or 2.18 above? GNOME 2.12 is mentioned several times. "But the shear number of enhancements make it impossible to list every change and improvement that have been made" Should be: "But the sheer number of enhancements makes it impossible to list every change and improvement that has been made" Note the spelling mistake: "shear number of..." should be "Sheer number of ..." "Six months from the day that GNOME 2.20 is released GNOME 2.16 will follow and build on the fantastic base of its predecessor. Things to look forward to in GNOME 2.16 include: ..." Do we mean GNOME 2.22 rather than GNOME 2.16? ;-) And what about the versions of GTK and Cairo? And, I, suppose, all the other features mentioned in that section? -- marketing-list mailing list marketing-list@gnome.org http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list