Hi, Darton! On Mon, 2010-02-15 at 14:09 -0500, Darton Williams wrote: > On Mon, Feb 15, 2010 at 7:32 AM, Lucas Rocha <luc...@gnome.org> wrote: > > > Download: > > - Main page looks ok, a final review would be nice. > > http://website-editors.gnome.org/download > Marking as "Draft Available", proofread. > > Quick note: the "How to Install GNOME" section uses contractions > (GNOME is -> GNOME's) resulting in an informal voice, is this the > intent?
Yes, that's the intent. The copy should appear casual and conversational. Thanks for your help! Regards, Claus -- marketing-list mailing list marketing-list@gnome.org http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list