To all responding with feedback, I like what you're saying. Go ahead and modify the text to what you think would be better!
http://piratepad.net/j4B5vOQBep Don't worry about changing it, all of the revisions are automatically saved. On 03/22/2013 11:30 AM, Flavia Weisghizzi wrote: > Il 22/03/2013 16:18, Andre Klapper ha scritto: >> On Fri, 2013-03-22 at 15:56 +0100, Flavia Weisghizzi wrote: >>> I'm sure we don't need to detail explain what GNOME is and what >>> GNOME makes: GNOME is THE leader in free software DE/project, and I'm >>> sure journalists know it. >> I don't think so. :) Even if most journalists "kind of know", their >> readers might not necessarily so it's helpful to provide some reusable >> info. >> >> andre > > I'm agree on providing some info, I'm not agree in focus first > paragraphs of the press release on it :) > I believe that we need to provide all the info regarding project, but > not at the top of the press release :) > > If you tale a look to the press release that generally are sent out > like [1] > or [2] you could easily find that all the "company" info are gathered > at the bottom :) > > [1] > https://www.apple.com/pr/library/2013/03/06Apple-Launches-iBookstore-in-Japan.html > > [2] > http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/news/press/2012/oct12/10-25windows8gapr.aspx > > Flavia > > >
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