Hi :) +1 A couple of minor amendments (as always) 4th paragraph, 1st line "Since at the moment there" to "Since, at the moment, there" or "Since (at the moment) there" I prefer the commas.
2nd paragraph, 1st line eol "addons" to "add-ons / extensions" or just "add-ons" this is used later in the announcement / press-release. Regards from Tom :) ________________________________ From: Florian Effenberger <flo...@documentfoundation.org> To: marketing@global.libreoffice.org Cc: Cor Nouws <oo...@nouenoff.nl>; Thorsten Behrens <t...@documentfoundation.org>; Andreas Mantke <ma...@gmx.de>; Rainer Bielefeld <libreoff...@bielefeldundbuss.de> Sent: Fri, 26 August, 2011 11:45:57 Subject: Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Extension website - broader publicity wanted Hi, Cor Nouws wrote on 2011-08-21 13:16: > == draft in Dunglish ;-) - remarks appreciated = thanks! Based on the feedback from Andreas Mantke and your draft, I've drafted this one - thoughts welcome! == LibreOffice launches extension and templates repository for public beta test Developers invited to contribute their addons Community-based review process ensures quality and reliability LibreOffice, the free office productivity suite, can be enhanced with hundreds of extensions and templates. Users can download these smart extras to improve the suite's functionality to fit their job or hobby, and developers can easily write their own add-ons and share it with millions of users worldwide. Since at the moment there is no reliable and stable source for downloading these handy add-ons, the LibreOffice community has put great efforts into launching a public repository. It does not only provide extensions and templates for LibreOffice, but also for OpenOffice.org and other compatible office suites. Users of these can benefit from the work and the commitment of our community, and are invited to have a look at recent versions of our product, which already has included has the most popular extensions, and comes with many new features. The new site is now in public beta testing at http://extensions-test.libreoffice.org and has been created in cooperation with the Plone community, on whose technology it is based. To ensure the quality and reliability of the offered extensions, a community-based review process is currently set in place: Community volunteers test and review available extensions, and those meeting criteria of quality will be tagged accordingly. We warmly invite all developers to submit their extensions and fill the repository, where millions of users worldwide will be able to download and benefit from their work. All extensions submitted during the public beta test will remain in the repository after the beta test, so this is your chance to join the efforts right from the beginning! == Florian -- Florian Effenberger <flo...@documentfoundation.org> Steering Committee and Founding Member of The Document Foundation Tel: +49 8341 99660880 | Mobile: +49 151 14424108 Skype: floeff | Twitter/Identi.ca: @floeff -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to marketing+h...@global.libreoffice.org Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to marketing+h...@global.libreoffice.org Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
