Hi :) +1 It often sounds sexier with the slightly foreign sound (eg such as "the everyone") but it's probably better to be right. "Explains" is active and makes it more exciting whereas "explained" puts it in the past. "Explained" is correct though.
One advantage of only getting things like this only 90% right is that it draws attention to the international nature of the project. So, it's a feature not a bug ;) Regards from Tom :) --- On Mon, 25/6/12, David Batterson <[email protected]> wrote: From: David Batterson <[email protected]> Subject: Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Re: Draft Conference PR To: [email protected] Date: Monday, 25 June, 2012, 7:13 RE: This is a major event, not only for those involved in the project, but also for the everyone interested in the use of free office software and open standards", explains Florian Effenberger, Chairman of the Board at The Document Foundation. I suggest these corrections: Change "but also for the everyone" to: but also for everyone Change "explains Florian" to: explained Florian Change "at the Document Foundation" to: of The Document Foundation. On Sun, Jun 24, 2012 at 11:02 PM, Marc Paré <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Florian, > > If we are going to publish this again, some suggested corrections: > > -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
