Hey Justin,

Thanks for taking your time to write up this article!

Just trying to nitpick the details a little:

- Minor inconsistency: under "DNF Upgrade Plugin", the command lines
do not have the "$" whereas the other commands had "$" infront of it.

- Minor confusion: under "Update software and back up your system",
"To upgrade your system, use GNOME Software or enter the following
command in a terminal." imo should be "To update your software..."

Once again, thanks! :)

PS: I saw a few articles you had on opensource.com and the latest one
was about "Imagine RIT", fantastic articles! :)

Best Regards,
Woo Huiren
Fedora Ambassador & Marketing | Open Organization Ambassador

https://twitter.com/woohuiren
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