Hi Huiren! Thanks, you're right, sounds way better in the way you wrote it, I'll fix it. Yes, you're right, it's "editing tools". I don't know why I wrote it the other way. Thanks for pointing out.
Cheers, Sylvia On Thursday, 9 June 2016, Huiren Woo <giantcra...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Sylvia, > > Thanks for taking your time to write up this article! Amazing > screenshots as a visual reference! > > Here are some comments: > > "Edition tools" - Did you mean 'Editing tools'? > "It’s simple, tidy and lightweight, letting you manage your images > by tags, folders and sites." - English here is a little odd, might > wanna rephrase it to something like 'Its simplicity, tidiness allows > you to manage your images by tags, folders and sites. On top of that, > it's really lightweight.' > The ending is a bit abrupt, might be good to have something to sum it > up. > > > Thanks! > > Best Regards, > Woo Huiren > Fedora Ambassador & Marketing | Open Organization Ambassador > > https://twitter.com/woohuiren > -- > Fedora Marketing mailing list > marketing@lists.fedoraproject.org <javascript:;> > > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/admin/lists/marketing@lists.fedoraproject.org
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