On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas <i...@browndouglas.plus.com> wrote: > Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading. > > Fair copy attached. > > I originally included the section "Multimedia", as it is the set of > Activities in http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/ > but not in the Walter/Sam contribution. > > I think it is the weakest section. Chat jars a bit on the page, as > "Chat" is used in the "Spins page template" to refer to IRC. > > My memory is that Jukebox is not part of the core set (due to non-free > components?).
You're memory is wrong! It uses gstreamer and there a number of free codecs that come as standard. Maybe you could download SoaS 22 and actually test it and see what's there! > Perhaps the section Multimedia as it stands should be deleted. Not going to happen. This isn't time for bikeshedding, it's time for tweaking the content as it stands. > Regards, > > Iain > > > On Mon, 2015-05-18 at 09:29 +0200, Sean DALY wrote: >> thanks Iain looks good >> >> some typos: >> Wwork -> Work >> >> FotoToon -> OK is singular not plural >> speech and though -> speech and thought >> Paint provides to tools -> Paint provides tools >> Make Sugar activities -> Make Sugar Activities / edit existing >> activities -> edit existing Activities / Browse activity -> Browse >> Activity (((Activities always init-capitalized in Sugar context when >> describing applications))) >> >> >> Also Pippy & Develop should be in a "Getting Technical" section not >> regrouped under "Learning by doing" please >> >> >> Tweaks: >> * Get Books. Download electronic books from all over the web. Explore >> with ease the >> classics and modern books from the Internet Archive, Feedbooks, etc. >> >> >> Music - I think this refers to the Jukebox Activity, should be: >> >> * Jukebox. Media player to play different kinds of audio and video >> files. >> >> However, I am not sure if this Activity is in the latest SoaS or not? >> >> >> * Record is the basic rich-media capture Activity. It lets you capture >> still images, video, and/or audio. (((remove "for the laptop" - we >> can't assume SoaS will be running on a laptop))) >> >> >> Finally, an HTML issue: the left/right curly quote marks (cf. "office >> desktop") which probably came in from copy/pasted text should either >> be replacd with simple double parentheses (" ") or the HTML >> entities “ and ” >> >> >> thanks >> >> Sean >> >> >> >> >> On Sun, May 17, 2015 at 6:12 PM, Iain Brown Douglas >> <i...@browndouglas.plus.com> wrote: >> On Sun, 2015-05-17 at 15:14 +0200, Sean DALY wrote: >> > Peter - Walter's edits were for the Activities descriptions, >> mine were >> > for the introduction, no reconciliation necessary >> > >> > >> > Sean >> > >> > >> > >> > On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 12:38 PM, Peter Robinson >> > <pbrobin...@gmail.com> wrote: >> > Walter sent some edits, I believe most of those have >> gone in, >> > we need >> > to update titles still I believe. >> > >> > This is what we currently have, the Activities list >> and layout >> > are now set. >> > >> > http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/ >> > >> > We can tweak the text but I need to have the edits >> > co-ordinated, >> >> Hi all, >> >> The attached text file starts from >> http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/, taken during >> Sunday, >> with contributions from Sean & Walter/Sam added. >> >> There is still some work to do, additions, subtractions or >> comments >> please! >> >> Regards, >> >> Iain >> >> > I >> > don't have time to to do that so please liaise with >> Walter to >> > come up >> > with the final edits so I can submit them early next >> week as a >> > single >> > final edit. >> > >> > Peter >> > >> > >> > >> > On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 11:25 AM, Sean DALY >> > <sdaly...@gmail.com> wrote: >> > > Peter - are the intro edits I sent going in? >> > > thanks >> > > Sean >> > > >> > > >> > > On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 3:00 PM, Peter Robinson >> > <pbrobin...@gmail.com> >> > > wrote: >> > >> >> > >> It's already in process >> > >> >> > >> On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 1:02 PM, Sam P. >> > <sam.parkins...@gmail.com> wrote: >> > >> > Hi Peter, >> > >> > >> > >> > I think Walter send out a good copy [1] with >> headers - >> > maybe we could >> > >> > use >> > >> > those headers? >> > >> > >> > >> > Thanks, >> > >> > Sam >> > >> > >> > >> > [1] >> > >> http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2015-May/050190.html >> > >> > >> > >> > On Thu, May 14, 2015 at 7:09 PM Peter Robinson >> > <pbrobin...@gmail.com> >> > >> > wrote: >> > >> >> >> > >> >> On Thu, May 14, 2015 at 6:15 AM, Sam Parkinson >> > >> >> <sam.parkins...@gmail.com> >> > >> >> wrote: >> > >> >> > Hi Peter, >> > >> >> > >> > >> >> > Peter Robinson wrote: >> > >> >> >> Hi Sam, Gonzalo et el, >> > >> >> >> >> > >> >> >> I've worked with the Fedora web team to >> update it >> > some based >> > >> >> >> partially >> > >> >> >> on Sam's details below. >> > >> >> >> >> > >> >> >> Details are here: >> > >> >> >> http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/ >> > >> >> >> >> > >> >> >> Let me know of any feedback, I personally >> think it >> > looks really fab! >> > >> >> > >> > >> >> > Yeah, it does. >> > >> >> > >> > >> >> > Is there a way to have different headers? >> Some of the >> > headings (esp. >> > >> >> > Education) are not aappropriate for Sugar. >> > >> >> >> > >> >> Yes, provide me details in concise details and >> we'll >> > review them and >> > >> >> get them integrated. 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