well done, Peter. I like it a lot!

could you post the actual text to [email protected] with a title
like "Metalink ID intro changes"?

On Thu, Nov 26, 2009 at 11:24 AM, Peter Poeml <[email protected]> wrote:
> Hi,
>
> what do you think about the following changes to the intro of the
> Internet Draft?
>
> Please read closely, the changes affect 50% of the intro. A patch is
> attached to this mail that details the changes. I re-wrapped the text
> before to make the changes easier visible.
>
> In particuluar, I'd be thankful if you provide feedback to the last
> paragraph. I don't know if it the whole intro too long now by
> enumerating more of the benefits that metalinks brings. I think that
> these are significant points, but it *could* be too much. That's also
> why I made it a separate paragraph, anyway.
>
> I'm committing the change now, because it is probably easier to revert
> (or amend) those things that you didn't like.
>
> Thanks,
> Peter
>



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