Revision: 6ca00b6003b1
Author:   [email protected] <[email protected]>
Date:     Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
Log:      doc review diameter-cca

http://code.google.com/p/jain-slee/source/detail?r=6ca00b6003b1&repo=diameter

Modified:
/resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Clustering.xml /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Introduction.xml /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Setup.xml /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Chapter-Resource_Adaptor_Type.xml /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Section-Activities.xml /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Section-Events.xml /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Section-Resource_Adaptor_Interface.xml /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Chapter-Resource_Adaptor.xml /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Configuration.xml /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Default_Resource_Adaptor_Entities.xml /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Logging_Traces_and_Alarms.xml

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--- /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Clustering.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Clustering.xml Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@
                id="ra_clustering_failover">
                <title>Failover</title>
                <para>
- The Diameter stack used by the &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE &THIS.RA; Resource Adaptor supports application session failover, with specific session state being replicated, thus only available for Application sessions. - Failover of application activities is transparent to SLEE applications. This means that SLEE applications must be in charge of properly adapting its state machine to recover generic session on node failure. + The Diameter stack used by the &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE &THIS.RA; Resource Adaptor supports application session failover with specific session state being replicated. Therefore, failover is only available for Application sessions. + Failover of application activities is transparent to SLEE applications. This means that SLEE applications must be in charge of correctly adapting its state machine to recover generic session on node failure.
                </para>
        </section>
        <section
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--- /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Introduction.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Introduction.xml Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@

<title>Introduction to &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE &THIS.RA; Resource Adaptor</title>

- <para>This resource adaptor provides <acronym>DIAMETER</acronym> <acronym>API</acronym> for <acronym>JSLEE</acronym> applications. <ulink url="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4006";>CCA</ulink> is a <acronym>RFC</acronym> specification of <acronym>DIAMETER</acronym> extension to allow real time credit control of end user services, ie. <acronym>SIP</acronym> services, equipment access, network access, ... etc.</para> - <para>Events represent <acronym>DIAMETER CCA</acronym> messages received by stack, that is requests and answers with command code equal to 272. Events are fired either on client or server activity.</para> + <para>This resource adaptor provides <acronym>DIAMETER</acronym> <acronym>API</acronym> for <acronym>JSLEE</acronym> applications. <ulink url="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4006";>CCA</ulink> is a <acronym>RFC</acronym> specification of <acronym>DIAMETER</acronym> extension to allow real time credit control of end user services, ie. <acronym>SIP</acronym> services, equipment access, network access,etc.</para> + <para>Events represent <acronym>DIAMETER CCA</acronym> messages received by the stack. These events are, requests and answers with command code equal to 272. Events are fired either on client or server activity.</para> <para>The activities are custom defined by <acronym>RA</acronym> Type to ease use of <acronym>RA</acronym>. Activities represent <acronym>DIAMETER</acronym> session between two peers. <acronym>SLEE</acronym> applications use activities to create,send and receive messages.</para>
 </chapter>
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--- /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Setup.xml Tue Sep 11 20:38:40 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Setup.xml Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
@@ -10,14 +10,14 @@

        <section id="preinstall_requirements_and_prerequisites">
                <title>Pre-Install Requirements and Prerequisites</title>
- <para>Ensure that the following requirements have been met before continuing with the install.</para> + <para>Ensure that the following requirements have been met before continuing with the installation.</para>
                <section id="hardware_requirements">
                        <title>Hardware Requirements</title>
- <para>The Resource Adaptor hardware's main concern is RAM memory and Java Heap size. It is recomended that for higher loads than 400 calls per second <acronym>JVM</acronym> has atleast 1GB heap.</para> + <para>Sufficient system RAM and Java Heap size are very important when working with Resource Adaptors. For loads higher than 400 calls per second, it is recommended that your <acronym>JVM</acronym> has at least 1GB heap.</para>
                </section>
                <section id="software_prerequisites">
                        <title>Software Prerequisites</title>
- <para>The <acronym>RA</acronym> requires &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE properly set.</para> + <para>The <acronym>RA</acronym> requires that &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE is correctly set.</para>
                </section>
        </section>

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
                                    <important>
<para>Git is used to manage Mobicents JAIN SLEE source code. Instructions for downloading, installing and using Git can be found at <ulink url="http://git-scm.com/"; /></para>
                                    </important>
- <para>Use Git to checkout a specific release source, the Git repository URL is &THIS.SOURCE_CODE_URL; , then switch to the specific release version, lets consider &THIS.VERSION;.</para> + <para>Use Git to checkout a specific release source. The Git repository URL is located at &THIS.SOURCE_CODE_URL;. Choose the desired release version as seen in the following example: &THIS.VERSION;.</para>
                                    <programlisting>
[usr]$ git clone &THIS.SOURCE_CODE_URL; mobicents-jain-slee-diameter
                                    [usr]$ cd mobicents-jain-slee-diameter
@@ -50,14 +50,14 @@
                                    [usr]$ cd resources/&THIS.RA.DIRNAME;
                                    [usr]$ mvn install
                                    </programlisting>
- <para>Once the process finishes you should have the <literal>deployable-unit</literal> jar file in the <filename>target</filename> directory, if &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE is installed and environment variable JBOSS_HOME is pointing to its underlying &JEE.PLATFORM; directory, then the deployable unit jar will also be deployed in the container.</para> + <para>Once the build is completed, you should have the <literal>deployable-unit</literal> jar file in the <filename>target</filename> directory. If &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE is installed and environment variable JBOSS_HOME is set to point to the underlying &JEE.PLATFORM; directory, then, the deployable unit jar will also be deployed in the container.</para>
                                </step>
                        </procedure>
                </section>

                <section id="master_source_building">
                        <title>Development Master Source Building</title>
- <para>Similar process as for <xref linkend="release_source_building"/>, the only change is the Git reference should be the <literal>master</literal>. The <literal>git checkout tags/&THIS.VERSION;</literal> command should not be performed. If already performed, the following should be used in order to switch back to the master:</para> + <para>This is a similar procedure to <xref linkend="release_source_building"/>. However, the Git reference should be the <literal>master</literal> branch. The <literal>git checkout tags/&THIS.VERSION;</literal> command should not be performed. To switch to the master branch, do the following:</para>
                    <programlisting>
                    [usr]$ git checkout master
                        </programlisting>
@@ -71,16 +71,16 @@
                <programlisting>
                [usr]$ ant
                </programlisting>
- <para>The script will copy the RA deployable unit jar to the <literal>default</literal> &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE server profile deploy directory, to deploy to another server profile use the argument <literal>-Dnode=</literal>.</para> + <para>The script will copy the RA deployable unit jar to the <literal>default</literal> &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE server/default/deploy directory. You can deploy to another server profile using the argument <literal>-Dnode=</literal>.</para>
        </section>

        <section id="uninstall">
<title>Uninstalling &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE &THIS.RA; Resource Adaptor</title> - <para>To uninstall the Resource Adaptor simply execute provided ant script <filename>build.xml</filename> <literal>undeploy</literal> target:</para> + <para>To uninstall the Resource Adaptor simply execute the provided ant script <filename>build.xml</filename> <literal>undeploy</literal> target:</para>
                <programlisting>
                [usr]$ ant undeploy
                </programlisting>
- <para>The script will delete the RA deployable unit jar from the <literal>default</literal> &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE server profile deploy directory, to undeploy from another server profile use the argument <literal>-Dnode=</literal>.</para> + <para>The script will delete the RA deployable unit jar from the <literal>default</literal> &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE server profile deploy directory. To undeploy from another server profile use the argument <literal>-Dnode=</literal>.</para>
        </section>

 </chapter>
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--- /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Chapter-Resource_Adaptor_Type.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Chapter-Resource_Adaptor_Type.xml Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@

        <title>Resource Adaptor Type</title>

- <para>Diameter CCA Resource Adaptor Type is defined by Mobicents team as part of effort to standarize RA Types.</para> + <para>Diameter CCA Resource Adaptor Type is defined by Mobicents team as part of the effort to standarize RA Types.</para>

        <xi:include
                xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude";
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--- /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Section-Activities.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Section-Activities.xml Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
                                        requests.
                                </para>
                                <para>
-                                       This activity type can be created with 
call to one of
+                                       This activity type can be created with 
a call to one of the
                                        methods
                                        of
                                        CreditControlProvider. It ends once 
underlying credit control
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--- /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Section-Events.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Section-Events.xml Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
@@ -152,6 +152,6 @@
        </table>

     <important>
- <para>Spaces where introduced in <literal>Name</literal> and <literal>Class</literal> column values, to correctly render the table. Please remove them when using copy/paste.</para> + <para>Spaces where introduced in <literal>Name</literal> and <literal>Class</literal> column values so that tables can be correctly render. Please remove them when using copy/paste.</para>
        </important>
 </section>
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--- /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Section-Resource_Adaptor_Interface.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra-type/Section-Resource_Adaptor_Interface.xml Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@

        <title>Resource Adaptor Interface</title>

-       <para>Resource Adaptor SBB Interface provides SBBs with means of
-               accessing RA objects required for interaction in DIAMETER 
world. It
+       <para>Resource Adaptor SBB Interface provides SBBs with ways to access
+               RA objects that are required for interaction in the DIAMETER 
world. It
                is defined as follows:</para>
        <programlisting language="Java" role="JAVA">

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--- /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Chapter-Resource_Adaptor.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Chapter-Resource_Adaptor.xml Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@

        <title>Resource Adaptor Implementation</title>

- <para>This <acronym>RA</acronym> uses the &THIS.PLATFORM; diameter stack to provide service. The stack is the result of the work done by &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE and Diameter development teams.</para> + <para>This <acronym>RA</acronym> uses the &THIS.PLATFORM; diameter stack to provide service. The stack is the result of the work done by the &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE and the Diameter development teams.</para>

        <xi:include
                xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude";
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--- /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Configuration.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Configuration.xml Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
        </table>

        <important>
- <para>JAIN SLEE 1.1 Specification requires values set for properties without a default value, which means the configuration for those properties are mandatory, otherwise the Resource Adaptor Entity creation will fail!</para> + <para>JAIN SLEE 1.1 Specification requires values set for properties without a default value, which means the configuration for those properties are mandatory, otherwise, the Resource Adaptor Entity creation will fail!</para>
        </important>

 </section>
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--- /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Default_Resource_Adaptor_Entities.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Default_Resource_Adaptor_Entities.xml Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@

<para>There is a single Resource Adaptor Entity created when deploying the Resource Adaptor, named <literal>DiameterCCA</literal>. The <literal>DiameterCCA</literal> entity uses the default Resource Adaptor configuration, specified in <xref linkend="ra_configuration" />.</para>

- <para>The <literal>DiameterCCA</literal> entity is also bound to Resource Adaptor Link Name <literal>DiameterCCA</literal>, to use it in an Sbb add the following XML to its descriptor:</para> + <para>The <literal>DiameterCCA</literal> entity is also bound to Resource Adaptor Link Name <literal>DiameterCCA</literal>. The following XML descriptor must be added if you want to use <literal>DiameterCCA</literal> in an Sbb:</para>
        <programlisting language="XML" role="XML"><![CDATA[

        <resource-adaptor-type-binding>
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--- /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Logging_Traces_and_Alarms.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-cca/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Logging_Traces_and_Alarms.xml Tue Dec 11 06:33:11 2012
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
        <section id="ra_tracers">
                <title>Tracers</title>
<para>Each Resource Adaptor Entity uses a single JAIN SLEE 1.1 Tracer, named <literal>DiameterCCAResourceAdaptor</literal>. - The related Log4j Logger category, which can be used to change the Tracer level from Log4j configuration, is <literal>javax.slee.RAEntityNotification[entity=DiameterCCAResourceAdaptor]</literal>.</para> + The related Log4j Logger category, <literal>javax.slee.RAEntityNotification[entity=DiameterCCAResourceAdaptor]</literal>, can be used to change the Tracer level from Log4j configuration.</para>
        </section>

        <section id="ra_alarms">

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