Comment by jean.deruelle:
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File: /docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Book_Info.xml
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Line 17: This user guide will help you get a better understanding of
&PLATFORM_NAME; SIP servlets and how they can be used in an enterprise
context. The guide will cover how to quickly get started using JBOSS and
Apache Tomcat containers. There are sample applications included for those
who want to grasp how to build SIP applications. You will also learn how to
use advanced features like clustering and failovers within the High
Availability framework. Finally, monitoring and security will be explained.
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"how they" should be "how it"
"how to quickly get started" should be "how to quickly get started with
&PLATFORM_NAME; SIP servlets either on top of JBoss or Apache Tomcat
containers"
"How to use advanced features like clustering and failovers within the High
Availability framework" should be "how to use advanced features like High
Availability through Clustering and Failover"
File:
/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/concept-chapter-ittsss-Introduction_to_the_SIP_Servlets_Server.xml
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Line 24: <title>Overview of SIP Servlets Server</title>
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Let's replace this by a more up to date version, see text and image on
http://code.google.com/p/mobicents/ below the video
Line 32: JAIN SLEE Server is used as the SLEE implementation.</para>
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Let's replace this by a more up to date version. see text at
http://code.google.com/p/sipservlets/
For more information:
http://code.google.com/p/sipservlets/source/detail?r=8f7888fc022bdaa287b5bccfd229cc20ce9c42e7
