Revision: f27522a8a842
Author:   [email protected] <[email protected]>
Date:     Wed Jan  2 06:45:39 2013
Log:      doc review slee diameter-ro resource adaptor

http://code.google.com/p/jain-slee/source/detail?r=f27522a8a842&repo=diameter

Modified:
/resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Introduction.xml /resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Setup.xml /resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Chapter-Resource_Adaptor.xml /resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Configuration.xml

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--- /resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Introduction.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Introduction.xml Wed Jan 2 06:45:39 2013
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@

<title>Introduction to &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE &THIS.RA; Resource Adaptor</title>

- <para>This resource adaptor provides a Diameter API for JAIN SLEE applications, according to Ro inteface based on Diameter protocol.</para> + <para>This resource adaptor provides a Diameter API for JAIN SLEE applications according to Ro inteface based on Diameter protocol.</para> <para>Ro is one of two IMS reference point for charging. It covers online charging - scenarios where charging information can affect, in real-time, the service rendered and therefore a direct interaction of the charging mechanism with session/service control is required.</para> <para>Online Charging occurs between two peers: the CTF (the online client, which issues request for accounting) and OCF (the server which performs accounting).</para> <para>Three cases for control of user credit for online charging are distinguished:
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--- /resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Setup.xml Tue Sep 11 20:38:40 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-Setup.xml Wed Jan 2 06:45:39 2013
@@ -10,15 +10,23 @@

        <section id="preinstall_requirements_and_prerequisites">
                <title>Pre-Install Requirements and Prerequisites</title>
- <para>Ensure that the following requirements have been met before continuing with the install.</para> + <para>Ensure that the following requirements have been met before continuing with the installation.</para>
                <section id="hardware_requirements">
                        <title>Hardware Requirements</title>
- <para>The Resource Adaptor hardware's main concern is RAM memory and Java Heap size, the more the better. For instance, while the underlying &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE may run with 1GB of RAM, 8GB is needed to achieve performance higher than 800 new requests per second.</para> - <para>Of course, memory is only needed to store the Resource Adaptor state, the faster the CPU more requests per second are supported, yet no particular CPU is a real requirement to use the RA.</para>
+                       <para>
+RAM and Java Heap size are very important with regards to Resource Adaptor. The more the RAM, the better the performance will be. For instance, while the underlying &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE may run with 1GB of RAM, 8GB is needed to achieve performance higher than 800 new requests per second.</para>
+                       <para>
+Memory is only needed to store the Resource Adaptor state. Therefore, the faster the CPU, the more requests per second can be quickly processed. That said, there is no minimum specified CPU speed required to use the RA.
+
+ </para>
                </section>
                <section id="software_prerequisites">
                        <title>Software Prerequisites</title>
- <para>The RA requires &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE properly set and Mobicents Diameter Multiplexer (<acronym>MUX</acronym>), which includes the stack, and &THIS.PLATFORM; Diameter Base RA to be properly installed too.</para>
+                       <para>
+
+The RA requires that &THIS.PLATFORM; is correctly set and that Mobicents Diameter Multiplexer (<acronym>MUX</acronym>), which includes the stack and the Mobicents is correctly installed.
+
+ </para>
                </section>
        </section>

@@ -34,7 +42,7 @@
                                    <important>
<para>Git is used to manage Mobicents JAIN SLEE source code. Instructions for downloading, installing and using Git can be found at <ulink url="http://git-scm.com/"; /></para>
                                    </important>
- <para>Use Git to checkout a specific release source, the Git repository URL is &THIS.SOURCE_CODE_URL; , then switch to the specific release version, lets consider &THIS.VERSION;.</para> + <para>Use Git to checkout a specific release source. The Git repository URL is located at https &THIS.SOURCE_CODE_URL;. Choose the desired release version as can be seen in the following example &THIS.VERSION;.</para>
                                    <programlisting>
[usr]$ git clone &THIS.SOURCE_CODE_URL; mobicents-jain-slee-diameter
                                    [usr]$ cd mobicents-jain-slee-diameter
@@ -51,14 +59,14 @@
                                    [usr]$ cd resources/&THIS.RA.DIRNAME;
                                    [usr]$ mvn install
                                    </programlisting>
- <para>Once the process finishes you should have the <literal>deployable-unit</literal> jar file in the <filename>target</filename> directory, if &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE is installed and environment variable JBOSS_HOME is pointing to its underlying &JEE.PLATFORM; directory, then the deployable unit jar will also be deployed in the container.</para> + <para>Once the build is completed, you should have the <literal>deployable-unit</literal> jar file in the <filename>target</filename> directory, if &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE is installed and environment variable JBOSS_HOME is pointing to its underlying &JEE.PLATFORM; directory, then the deployable unit jar will also be deployed in the container.</para>
                                </step>
                        </procedure>
                </section>

                <section id="master_source_building">
                        <title>Development Master Source Building</title>
- <para>Similar process as for <xref linkend="release_source_building"/>, the only change is the Git reference should be the <literal>master</literal>. The <literal>git checkout tags/&THIS.VERSION;</literal> command should not be performed. If already performed, the following should be used in order to switch back to the master:</para> + <para>Similar process as for <xref linkend="release_source_building"/>, the only change is the Git reference should be the <literal>master</literal>. The <literal>git checkout tags/&THIS.VERSION;</literal> command should not be performed. If already performed, the following should be used in order to switch back to the master branch:</para>
                    <programlisting>
                    [usr]$ git checkout master
                        </programlisting>
@@ -72,7 +80,11 @@
                <programlisting>
                [usr]$ ant
                </programlisting>
- <para>The script will copy the RA deployable unit jar to the <literal>default</literal> &THIS.PLATFORM; JAIN SLEE server profile deploy directory, to deploy to another server profile use the argument <literal>-Dnode=</literal>.</para>
+               <para>
+
+The script will copy the RA deployable unit jar to the <literal>default</literal> &THIS.PLATFORM; server/default/deploy directory. To deploy to another server profile, use the argument <literal>-Dnode=</literal>.
+
+</para>
        </section>

        <section id="uninstall">
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--- /resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Chapter-Resource_Adaptor.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Chapter-Resource_Adaptor.xml Wed Jan 2 06:45:39 2013
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@

        <title>Resource Adaptor Implementation</title>

- <para>This <acronym>RA</acronym> uses the &THIS.PLATFORM; Diameter Stack, an improvement over <ulink url="http://jdiameter.dev.java.net";>jDiameter Stack</ulink>. The stack is the result of the work done by &THIS.PLATFORM; Diameter and jDiameter development teams, and source code is provided in all releases.</para> + <para>This <acronym>RA</acronym> uses the &THIS.PLATFORM; Diameter Stack which is an improvement over <ulink url="http://jdiameter.dev.java.net";>jDiameter Stack</ulink>. The stack is the result of the work done by the &THIS.PLATFORM; Diameter and the jDiameter development teams. The source code is provided in all releases.</para>

        <xi:include
                xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude";
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--- /resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Configuration.xml Sun Aug 12 10:49:01 2012 +++ /resources/diameter-ro/docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/ra/Section-Configuration.xml Wed Jan 2 06:45:39 2013
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
        </table>

        <important>
- <para>JAIN SLEE 1.1 Specification requires values set for properties without a default value, which means the configuration for those properties are mandatory, otherwise the Resource Adaptor Entity creation will fail!</para> + <para>JAIN SLEE 1.1 Specification requires that values are set for properties without a default value. This means that the configuration for those properties are mandatory, otherwise, the Resource Adaptor Entity creation will fail!</para>
        </important>

 </section>

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