Revision: 7bed67aabfe3
Author:   Vinu S Renish <[email protected]>
Date:     Sat Jan 12 11:38:21 2013
Log:      edited for clarity and grammar

http://code.google.com/p/jss7/source/detail?r=7bed67aabfe3

Modified:
 /docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-CAP.xml

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--- /docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-CAP.xml Sat Jan 12 08:46:23 2013 +++ /docs/sources/src/main/resources/en-US/Chapter-CAP.xml Sat Jan 12 11:38:21 2013
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
        </important>
        <note>
                <para>&THIS.PLATFORM; &THIS.APPLICATION;
- CAP has full implementation for Phase 1 and Phase 2 we welcome any contribution to implement + CAP has full implementation for Phase 1 and Phase 2 and we welcome any contribution to implement other Phases. We will provide you with all the guidance you may require.
                        The list of implemented operations can be found at
<ulink type="http" url="http://code.google.com/p/jss7/source/browse/cap/CAPMessagesImplemented.ods";>CAPMessagesImplemented.ods</ulink>.
@@ -60,16 +60,16 @@
                        interface defines the methods required to represent CAP 
Protocol Stack.
CAPStack exposes <classname>org.mobicents.protocols.ss7.cap.api.CAPProvider</classname>
                        that interacts directly with CAPStack.
- This interface defines the methods that will be used by any registered CAP User application. - CAP user application must implement interfaces to listen CAP messages and dialogue and component handling primitives. + This interface defines the methods that will be used by any registered CAP-User application. + CAP-User application must implement interfaces to listen for CAP messages and for dialogue and component handling primitives. One interface is <classname>org.mobicents.protocols.ss7.cap.api.CAPDialogListener</classname>
                        (listening associated with dialog events).
Others are one or more interfaces for listening to messages associated with component events based on - <classname>org.mobicents.protocols.ss7.cap.api.CAPServiceListener interface.</classname> + <classname>org.mobicents.protocols.ss7.cap.api.CAPServiceListener</classname> interface.
                </para>

                <para>
- Each CAP-User interested in listening to messages specific to CAP Service implements specific <classname>CAPServiceListener</classname>. + Each CAP-User interested in listening to messages specific to a CAP Service must implement the specific <classname>CAPServiceListener</classname>.
                        <itemizedlist>
                                <listitem>
                                        <para>
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
                                        </para>
                                </listitem>
                        </itemizedlist>
- CAP-User interested in all the services must implement all the service listener class. + CAP-User interested in all the services must implement all the service listener classes.
                </para>
                <!--  <para>
                The class diagram looks like
@@ -113,8 +113,8 @@

                <para>
                        The 
<classname>org.mobicents.protocols.ss7.cap.CAPStackImpl</classname>
-                       is concrete implementation of 
<classname>CAPStack.</classname>
- The CAP User application gets access to <classname>CAPProvider</classname> by doing JNDI look-up as explained in <xref linkend="design_overview_ss7_service"/>.
+                       is a concrete implementation of 
<classname>CAPStack.</classname>
+ The CAP-User application gets access to <classname>CAPProvider</classname> by doing a JNDI look-up as explained in <xref linkend="design_overview_ss7_service"/>.
                </para>

                <programlisting
@@ -125,9 +125,9 @@
                </programlisting>

                <para>
- The CAP User application should register the concrete implementation of <classname>CAPDialogListener</classname> + The CAP-User application should register the concrete implementation of <classname>CAPDialogListener</classname> with <classname>CAPProvider</classname> to listen for incoming CAP Dialog and CAP Primitive messages. - The CAP User application should register the concrete implementation of <classname>CAPServiceListener</classname> + The CAP-User application should register the concrete implementation of <classname>CAPServiceListener</classname> with corresponding <classname>CAPServiceBase </classname> to listen for incoming CAP Service messages. Following CAPServiceBase are exposed by <classname>CAPProvider</classname>.
                        <itemizedlist>
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
 }]]>
        </programlisting>

- <para>Before any CAP specific service can be used, the corresponding service should be activated.</para> + <para>Before any CAP specific service can be used, the corresponding service should be activated as shown below:</para>

                <programlisting language="Java" role="JAVA"><![CDATA[
         ....
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@
        </programlisting>

                <para>
-                       The CAP User Application leverages:
+                       The CAP-User Application leverages:
                        <itemizedlist>
                                <listitem>
<para><classname>MAPParameterFactory</classname> to create instances of
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@
<title>&THIS.APPLICATION; Sending a CAP request (InitialDPRequest as an example)</title>

                <para>
-                       For sending a CAP request we need at the SSF side:
+                       For sending a CAP request you must do the following at 
the SSF side:
                </para>
                <para>
                        - Create a new CAP Dialog
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@
                        - Wait for a response and other instructions from the 
SCF
                </para>
                <para>
- At the SCF side when receiving TC-Begin message the following sequence of events occur: + At the SCF side when the TC-Begin message is received, the following sequence of events occur:
                </para>
                <programlisting
                        language="Java"
@@ -301,11 +301,11 @@

                <para>
                        This is the request for CAP Dialog processing.
-                       A CAP user can reject the Dialog by invoking 
capDialog.refuse() method.
+ A CAP-User can reject the Dialog by invoking <literal>capDialog.refuse()</literal> method.
                </para>

                <para>
- Then the incoming primitives corresponded events (one or more) occur. In this case it is + Then the incoming primitives corresponding events (one or more) occur. In this case it is
                </para>
                <programlisting
                        language="Java"
@@ -352,10 +352,10 @@
 ]]></programlisting>

                <para>
- If preparing the response spends much time we should return the control and prepare the answer in your thread. + If preparing the response takes time, you should return the control and prepare the answer in a separate thread.
                </para>
                <para>
- If error or reject primitives are included into a TCAP message following events occur: + If error or reject primitives are included into a TCAP message the following events occur:
                </para>
                <programlisting
                        language="Java"
@@ -367,9 +367,9 @@
 ]]></programlisting>

                <para>
- After all incoming components have been processing onDialogDelimiter(CAPDialog capDialog); - event is invoking (or onDialogClose(CAPDialog capDialog) in TC-END case). - If all response components have been prepared we can tell the stack to send response: + After all incoming components have been processed, the event <literal>onDialogDelimiter(CAPDialog capDialog);</literal> + event is invoked (or <literal>onDialogClose(CAPDialog capDialog)</literal> in TC-END case). + If all response components have been prepared you can tell the Stack to send response:
                        <itemizedlist>
                                <listitem>
<para><classname>capDialog.close(false);</classname> - to send TC-END</para>
@@ -381,18 +381,17 @@
<para><classname>capDialog.close(true);</classname> - sends TC-END without any components (prearrangedEnd)</para>
                                </listitem>
                        </itemizedlist>
- Instead of send() and close(boolean prearrangedEnd) methods you can invoke
-                       sendDelayed() or closeDelayed(boolean prearrangedEnd) 
methods.
-                       These methods make the same as sned and close() methods.
-                       But when invoking it from events of parsing incoming 
components
- real sending and dialog closing will occur only when all incoming components events + Instead of the methods <literal>send()</literal> and <literal>close(boolean prearrangedEnd)</literal>, you can invoke + <literal>sendDelayed()</literal> or <literal>closeDelayed(boolean prearrangedEnd)</literal>. + These methods are the same as <literal>send()</literal> and <literal>close(boolean prearrangedEnd)</literal> methods, but when invoking them from events of parsing incoming components + real sending and dialog closing will occur only when all incoming component events
                        and onDialogDelimiter() or onDialogClose() would be 
processed.

- If all response components have been prepared we should return the control and
-                       will send a response when all components are ready.
+ If all response components have been prepared you should return the control and
+                       send a response when all components are ready.
                </para>
                <para>
- In the error case you can terminate a CAP dialog in any method by invoking + In case of an error, you can terminate a CAP dialog in any method by invoking:
                        <itemizedlist>
                                <listitem>
<para><classname>capDialog.abort(CAPUserAbortReason abortReason);</classname> - sends TC-U-ABORT primitive</para>
@@ -400,7 +399,7 @@
                        </itemizedlist>
                </para>
                <para>
- If no local actions or no response from a remote size for a long time timeouts occur and the following methods are invoked: + If there are no local actions or no response from a remote size for a long time, timeouts occur and the following methods are invoked:
                        <itemizedlist>
                                <listitem>
<para><classname>CAPDialogListener.onDialogTimeout(CAPDialog capDialog);</classname></para>
@@ -411,9 +410,9 @@
                        </itemizedlist>
                </para>
                <para>
- In <classname>onDialogTimeout()</classname> method you can invoke <classname>capDialog.keepAlive();</classname> to prevent closing a Dialog. + In the <classname>onDialogTimeout()</classname> method you can invoke <classname>capDialog.keepAlive();</classname> to prevent a Dialog from closing. For preventing an Invoke timeout you should invoke <classname>resetInvokeTimer(Long invokeId);</classname>
-                       (before onInvokeTimeout() occured).
+                       (before <classname>onInvokeTimeout()</classname> 
occurs).
                </para>
        </section>

@@ -422,8 +421,6 @@
        <section
                id="cap_usage_example">
                <title>&THIS.APPLICATION; CAP Usage</title>
-               <para>The complete example looks like</para>
-
                <programlisting
                        language="Java"
                        role="JAVA"><![CDATA[

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