Dear Authors,

There is an issue with this text in Section 3.1:

Similarly, more than one MTMA could be
   deployed by the operator, for example to serve different multicast
   groups (not shown in Figure 1).  This would require support for MLD
   proxy with multiple interfaces [I-D.ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-ropt-04#ref-I-D.ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source>],
   [I-D.contreras-multimob-multiple-upstreams
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-ropt-04#ref-I-D.contreras-multimob-multiple-upstreams>],
   [I-D.asaeda-pim-mldproxy-multif
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-ropt-04#ref-I-D.asaeda-pim-mldproxy-multif>].

As I mentioned to the authors, one I-D is missing in the list.
But more importantly, it is not clear if multiple MTMAs is normative or
informative. I think it is better to make in informative because otherwise
these I-Ds need to be listed in the normative references list.

So, please remove the above text from Section 3.1 and instead put it into
Appendix A and do not forget to make Appendix A informative.

Once multiple interface support with MLD proxy is cleared out in IETF, you
are welcome to submit a separate draft on multiple MTMA support with a
clear explanation how it would work for tunnel convergence
Regards,

Behcet



On Fri, May 3, 2013 at 12:29 PM, <[email protected]> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Multicast Mobility Working Group of the
> IETF.
>
>         Title           : Multicast Mobility Routing Optimizations for
> Proxy Mobile IPv6
>         Author(s)       : Juan Carlos Zuniga
>                           Luis M. Contreras
>                           Carlos J. Bernardos
>                           Seil Jeon
>                           Younghan Kim
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-ropt-04.txt
>         Pages           : 25
>         Date            : 2013-05-03
>
> Abstract:
>    The MULTIMOB group has specified a base solution to support IP
>    multicasting in a PMIPv6 domain [RFC6224].  In this document, some
>    enhancements to the base solution are described.  These enhancements
>    include the use of a multicast tree mobility anchor as the
>    topological anchor point for multicast traffic, as well as a direct
>    routing option where the MAG can provide access to multicast content
>    in the local network.  These enhancements provide benefits such as
>    reducing multicast traffic replication and supporting different
>    PMIPv6 deployment scenarios.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-ropt
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-ropt-04
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-ropt-04
>
>
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