Hi Thomas, authors,
Here are my comments on this draft. You can take it as part of WGLC
comments. WGLC will be issued shortly.
abstract and introduction
selective route optimization schemes - add using multicast tree mobility
anchor or multicast capable LMA
Figs 1 & 2 - change their placement and reformat, this may lead to the
whole figure in one page
Sec. 3.2.2 - to enable multicast data
transition from an MN - replace transition with transmission?
Sec. 3.2.3.1 sending
PIM registers to the RP - this is explained in Sec. 4.3.2, add pointer
RPF (Reverse Path Forwarding) - Reverse Path Forwarding (RPF)
BIDIR PIM - BIDIR-PIM
Sec. 3.2.4
the multicast
routing information base (MRIB) of the MAG - I thought this was not
possible? later on seems to be clarified in Sec. 4.3 & 4.4 (I mean
according to our face-to-face conversations in the past?)
Sec. 3.2.5
There is no mechanism to suppress upstream
forwarding in the absence of receivers. - this is solved in Sec. 5,
add a pointer to the section that brings some solution
Sec. 4.3 4.4 & Fig. 3 (b)
see comment above on PIM at MAG
Sec. 4.3.6 should be subsection of 4.3.5?
Sec. 5.3 Operations at the Multicast Sender - the operation described here
is not performed by the MN which is the multicast source/sender, so clarify
same in Sec. 5.4. Operations at the Multicast Listener
Sec. 5.4
ASM with IGMPv3/MLDv2 - why not have this discussion in the first case,
i.e. ASM with IGMPv2/MLDv1?
Fig. 1 caption is too long - shorten it and carry the text to Sec. 3.1.
In the abstract,
This document describes the support of mobile multicast senders - This
document describes an experimental protocol to support mobile multicast
senders
Regards,
Behcet
On Mon, Oct 21, 2013 at 10:17 AM, Behcet Sarikaya <[email protected]>wrote:
> Thanks Thomas for the revision.
>
> Let me read it and then we will issue a WGLC.
>
> Regards,
>
> Behcet
>
>
> On Sat, Oct 19, 2013 at 12:14 PM, Thomas C. Schmidt <
> [email protected]> wrote:
>
>> Hi folks,
>>
>> we have eliminated the sub-clause objected by Cong ... the draft should
>> be fully ready for WGLC, now.
>>
>> Thomas
>>
>>
>> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-**source-06.txt
>> has been successfully submitted by Thomas C. Schmidt and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>>
>> Filename: draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-**source
>> Revision: 06
>> Title: Mobile Multicast Sender Support in Proxy Mobile IPv6
>> (PMIPv6) Domains
>> Creation date: 2013-10-19
>> Group: multimob
>> Number of pages: 26
>> URL: http://www.ietf.org/internet-**drafts/draft-ietf-multimob-**
>> pmipv6-source-06.txt<http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source-06.txt>
>> Status: http://datatracker.ietf.org/**doc/draft-ietf-multimob-**
>> pmipv6-source<http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source>
>> Htmlized: http://tools.ietf.org/html/**draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-**
>> source-06<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source-06>
>> Diff: http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?**url2=draft-ietf-multimob-**
>> pmipv6-source-06<http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source-06>
>>
>> Abstract:
>> Multicast communication can be enabled in Proxy Mobile IPv6 domains
>> via the Local Mobility Anchors by deploying MLD proxy functions at
>> Mobile Access Gateways, via a direct traffic distribution within an
>> ISP's access network, or by selective route optimization schemes.
>> This document describes the support of mobile multicast senders in
>> Proxy Mobile IPv6 domains for all three scenarios. Protocol
>> optimizations for synchronizing PMIPv6 with PIM, as well as a peering
>> function for MLD Proxies are defined. Mobile sources always remain
>> agnostic of multicast mobility operations.
>>
>>
>>
>>
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