Hi,

I've taken a look at the current version of the draft and I think it is well written and in a good shape.

Here are two additional comments:

3.1. Overview
    Figure 1: Local Mobiity Anchor ==> Local Mobility Anchor

4.2.1.  Considerations for PIM-SM on the Upstream
    (see Section Section 3.2.3.1) ==> (see Section 3.2.3.1)


Regards,
    Sebastian



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Subject: [multimob] draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source-06

Folks,

This message starts a four week
Multimob Working Group last call

on advancing:


        Title           : Mobile Multicast Sender Support in Proxy
Mobile IPv6 (PMIPv6) Domains

        Author(s)       : Thomas C. Schmidt

                          Shuai Gao

                          Hong-Ke Zhang

                          Matthias Waehlisch

        Filename        : draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source-06.txt

        Pages           : 26

        Date            : 2013-10-19






as Experimental.  Substantive comments and statements of support

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Editorial suggestions can be sent to the authors. This last call will

end on November 22, 2013.

Regards,

Behcet
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