Hi Thanks for posting this much improved version. I have some comments on this one too though. Can others in the WG please also see if they are happy with this latest one?
Here are my minor comments. Mark it as an update of RFC5568. Typo in 4.1.2: indicatior IN 4.2.2 it says: The PMAG then waits for receiving the Multicast Acknowledgement Option(s) with a HACK message (see Section 5.4) and the creation of the bidirectional tunnel with NMAG. Better language to write "wait until it receives"? Also: It SHOULD start forwarding traffic down the tunnel interface for those groups an MLD listener report was received from NMAG. Add "for which"? "For those groups for which an MLD"... 5.2: In most of the document you use FBACK and HACK, but here you refer to them as FBAck and HAck. Appendix A: You write "In this section", but perhaps say appendix? Remove change log? Not that useful in the RFC I think. Stig _______________________________________________ multimob mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/multimob
