Interesting... I found it more juxtapositional than linear. Which worked for me.
I was also caught by the idea of a game. But all my thoughts down that line were very dark. Leaving aside puzzles such as how many limousines you can hit with paint, I was left wondering what the game would be... "KETTLE! is seven hours of hell... negotiate with an alien force half man half horse... make sense of directions to keep you standing still... search the scene for resources to fight sub-zero temperatures... hang from a bridge over icy water in your attempt to escape... you won't even stop for a comfort break." Still angry about the erosion of civil liberties, I guess. Ann -----Original Message----- From: netbehaviour-boun...@netbehaviour.org [mailto:netbehaviour-boun...@netbehaviour.org] On Behalf Of dave miller Sent: 10 January 2011 09:19 To: manik; NetBehaviour for networked distributed creativity Subject: Re: [NetBehaviour] The Violence of the Scene Hi Manik Thanks for your advice - usual story - you're right I do tend to follow the same traditional story structure - start middle end - it's predictable and worth exploring new structures, though I wont be the first to try this. Doesn't keep your mind awake after consuming - that's something for me to think about thanks again dave On 9 January 2011 12:50, manik <ma...@sbb.rs> wrote: > ...ONLY ONE THING'S IMPORTANT-BEGINNING/THE END...YOU SHOW US IN YOUR COMIC > HOW THINGS DEVELOP AND THE END/IT'S ACTUALLY PATTERN OF ALL END OF THIS SORT > OF NARRATIVE/...IT'S USUAL STORY AND THERE'S NOTHING TO KEEP OUR MIND AWAKE > AFTER CONSUMING...IT COULD BE /FOR EXAMPLE...I JUST SEE THAT PICTURE ON MY > MIND- ONE PERSON GIVE BANANA TO OTHER AND SAY:,,THANKS IN > ADVICE!,,...MR.MILLER...I LIKE SOME OF YOUR DRAWN STORIES AND I HOPE YOU > WILL DO LIKE MANIK SAID IT'S RIGHT TO DO...THAT'S OUR > ADVICE...MANIK...JANUARY...2011... > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "dave miller" <dave.miller...@gmail.com> > To: "NetBehaviour for networked distributed creativity" > <netbehaviour@netbehaviour.org> > Sent: Saturday, January 08, 2011 9:37 PM > Subject: [NetBehaviour] The Violence of the Scene > > > http://davemiller.org/drawings/riots/violence_of_the_scene.png > > This drawing is based on and inspired by some recent news articles, > and is mostly factual, though some bits I've made up. It's not really > finished yet, but would really appreciate feedback, and suggestions on > what I could do with it - any ideas on where I could show it/ send it? > Is the format any good, or better as a book, or a screen based thing. > I also wondered if this could make a decent computer game? > > many thanks, dave > _______________________________________________ > NetBehaviour mailing list > NetBehaviour@netbehaviour.org > http://www.netbehaviour.org/mailman/listinfo/netbehaviour > > __________ NOD32 4979 (20100328) Information __________ > > This message was checked by NOD32 antivirus system. > http://www.eset.com > > > _______________________________________________ > NetBehaviour mailing list > NetBehaviour@netbehaviour.org > http://www.netbehaviour.org/mailman/listinfo/netbehaviour > _______________________________________________ NetBehaviour mailing list NetBehaviour@netbehaviour.org http://www.netbehaviour.org/mailman/listinfo/netbehaviour _______________________________________________ NetBehaviour mailing list NetBehaviour@netbehaviour.org http://www.netbehaviour.org/mailman/listinfo/netbehaviour
