Note: removed Ingo from the CC list, I had added it first just because
he advocated reducing the number of mailing lists, so I wanted him to
know that we're trying to do that.

Em Wed, Dec 05, 2007 at 10:27:36AM +0000, Gerrit Renker escreveu:
> Today being Wednesday, below is some feedback after working through the patch 
> set.
> Hope this is helpful. 
> 
> Patch #1:
> ---------
>   Several new good points are introduced:
>   - IP_DCCP_TFRC_DEBUG is made dependent on IP_DCCP_TFRC_DEBUG which is useful
>   - the select from CONFIG_IP_DCCP_CCID3 => CONFIG_DCCP_TFRC_LIB
>   - the cleanup action in tfrc_module_init() (when packet_history_init() 
> fails)
>     was previously missing, this is a good catch.
>   Also a note: tfrc_pr_debug() is not currently used (but may be later should 
> the 
>                code common to both CCID3 and CCID4 be shared).

OK
                  
> Patches #2/#6:
> --------------
>   Separated from main patch, no problems (were initially submitted in this 
> format).
>   I wonder whether switching back to smaller patch sizes is better?

Patches that do one thing that is logically separated from others are
preferred, as its analisys is made faster.

Patches that rewrite an existing functionality are done best when the
functions being replaced keep as much as possible the same name. For
instance, in the new RX handling code we need to alloc the RX hist
internal structures, in the previous implementation we also needed to do
that, it also needs to purge entries, as the old one needed. Previous
one was a linked list, the new one is a ring. As we go we can and should
add new APIs when needed, but trying to keep an API so that if in the
future we decide to rework the internal structures, this can be done in
a plugin fashion, without changing too much its users (CCIDs in this
case), so that we can get back to the old one with minor disruption to
the users if needed. Sometimes we manage to do that, some times we need
to improve upon the current API, but the goal remains the same.
 
> Patch #3: 
> ---------
>   Renames s/tfrc_tx_hist/tfrc_tx_hist_slab/g; no problems.

This was for consistency with the other slabs in DCCP:

[EMAIL PROTECTED] net-2.6.25]$ find net/dccp/ -name "*.c" | xargs grep 'struct 
kmem_cache'
net/dccp/ccids/lib/packet_history.c:static struct kmem_cache *tfrc_tx_hist_slab;
net/dccp/ccids/lib/packet_history.c:static struct kmem_cache *tfrc_rx_hist_slab;
net/dccp/ccids/lib/loss_interval.c:static struct kmem_cache *dccp_li_cachep 
__read_mostly;
net/dccp/ackvec.c:static struct kmem_cache *dccp_ackvec_slab;
net/dccp/ackvec.c:static struct kmem_cache *dccp_ackvec_record_slab;
net/dccp/ccid.c:        struct kmem_cache *slab;
net/dccp/ccid.c:static void ccid_kmem_cache_destroy(struct kmem_cache *slab)
[EMAIL PROTECTED] net-2.6.25]$

> Patch #4:
> ---------
>   packet_history_init() initialises both RX and TX history and is later 
> called by the module_init()
>   function in net/dccp/ccids/lib/tfrc.c. Just a suggestion, it is possible to 
> simplify this further,
>   by doing all the initialisation / cleanup in tfrc.c:
>     int __init {rx,tx}_packet_history_init()
>     {
>           tfrc_{rx,tx}_hist_slab = kmem_cache_create("tfrc_{rx,tx}_hist", 
> ...);
>           return tfrc_{rx,tx}_hist_slab == NULL ? - ENOBUFS : 0;
>     }
>   and then call these successively in tfrc_module_init().

Idea here was to have each C source file to have a init module. Perhaps
we should try to break packet_history.c into tx_packet_history and
rx_packet_history.c. We can do that later to try to meet the goal of
being able to see what is being replaced.
 
> Patch #5:
> ---------
>   The naming scheme introduced here is 
>         s/dccp_rx/tfrc_rx/g; 
>         s/dccphrx/tfrchrx/g;
>   I wonder, while at it, would it be possible to extend this and extend this 
> to other parts
>   of the code? Basically this is the same discussion as earlier on [EMAIL 
> PROTECTED] with Leandro,
>   who first came up with this naming scheme. There the same question came up 
> and the result
>   of the discussion was that a prefix of  `tfrchrx' is cryptic; if something 
> simpler is 
>   possible then it would be great.

As we did with the ackvecs, will do that later.
 
> Patch #7:
> ---------
>  * ccid3_hc_rx_detect_loss() can be fully removed since no other code 
> references it any
>    further.

I left it to try have the diff not mixing up removal of its
implementation with the implementation of the function just after it,
ccid3_hx_rx_packet_recv. Will remove it later.

>  * bytes_recv also counts the payload_size's of non-data packets, which is 
> wrong (it should only
>    sum up the sum of bytes transferred as data packets)        

As said to you in private message I'll get back to the way you wrote, as
you mentioned that upcoming patches will make good use of that.

I'll try to restrain me to not do too many changes.
 
>  * loss handling is not correctly taken care of: unlike in the other part, 
> both data and non-data
>    packets are used to detect loss (this is not correctly handled in the 
> current Linux implementation).
 
See previous comment
 
>  * tfrc_rx_hist_entry_data_packet() is not needed:
>    - a similar function, called dccp_data_packet(), was introduced in patch 
> 2/7

I thought about that, but dccp_data_packet is for skbs,
tfrc_rx_hist_entry_data_packet is for tfrc_rx_hist_entries, I guess we
should just make dccp_data_packet receive the packet type and not an
object that has a packet type field.

>    - code compiles cleanly without tfrc_rx_hist_entry_data_packet()
>    - all references to this function are deleted by patch 7/7
>  * is another header file (net/dccp/ccids/lib/packet_history_internal.h) 
> really necessary?
>    - net/dccp/ccids/lib has already 3 x header file, 4 x source file

Idea here is to not expose data structures and functions that are used
only by the rx handling and loss history code. 

>    - with the removal of tfrc_rx_hist_entry_data_packet(), only struct 
> tfrc_rx_hist_entry
>      remains as the sole occupant of that file
>    - how about hiding the internals of struct tfrc_rx_hist_entry by putting 
> it into packet_history.c,
>      as it was done previously in a similar way for the TX packet history?

See previous comment.
 
>  * in ccid3_hc_rx_insert_options(), due to hunk-shifting or something else, 
> there is still the
>    call to dccp_insert_option_timestamp(sk, skb)
>    --> this was meant to be removed by an earlier patch (which also removed 
> the Elapsed Time option);
>    --> in the original submission of this patch the call to 
> dccp_insert_option_timestamp() did no
>        longer appear (as can be found in the [EMAIL PROTECTED] mailing list 
> archives), and the test tree
>        likewise does not use it;
>    --> it can be removed with full confidence since no part of the code uses 
> timestamps sent by the
>        HC-receiver (only the HC-sender timestamps are used); and it is 
> further not required by the
>        spec to send HC-receiver timestamps (RFC 4342, section 6)

I removed that on purpose, it didn't look related to the main goal of
the patch nor was mentioned in the changeset, I'll add it as a separate
patch with the explanation you provided above (and in the past).
 
>  * one of the two variables ccid3hcrx_tstamp_last_feedback and 
> ccid3hcrx_tstamp_last_ack is
>    redundant and can be removed (this may be part of a later patch); the 
> variable ccid3hcrx_tstamp_last_feedback
>    is very long (function is clear due to type of ktime_t).

will change that later. I.e. these things can be changed later, avoiding
such changes at this point reduces the size of the patch, which is
always good.
 
>  * the inlines are a good idea regarding type safety, but I take it that we 
> can now throw overboard the old rule
>    of 80 characters per line? Due to the longer names of the inlines, some 
> expressions end at column 98 (cf. 
>    tfrc_rx_hist_sample_rtt(); but to be honest I'd rather get rid of that 
> function since the receiver-RTT
>    sampling is notoriously inaccurate (wrong place to measure) and then there 
> is little left to argue with the inlines).

We must try as much as possible to not have more than 80 characters per
line, but at the same time the kernel is ever growing, namespacing is
required to be able to use tools such as ctags, and even to help in
decoding oopses I'd say, as we can get more information on a backtrace.

>  * with regard to RX history initialisation, would you be amicable to the 
> idea of performing the RX/TX history, and
>    loss intervals history in tfrc.c, as suggested for patch 1/7 (shortens the 
> routines)?

See my previous comment.
 
>  * tfrc_rx_hist_entry is lacking documentation (my fault, had been forgotten 
> in the initial submission):
>       /** 
>        * tfrc_rx_hist_entry - Store information about a single received packet
>        * @ptype:   the type (5.1) of the packet
>        ...
>        */
>   
>  * is it really necessary to give the field members of known structures long 
> names such as
>          tfrc_rx_hist_loss_prev(h)->tfrchrx_seqno?
>    This is the same comment as per patch 5/7 and there has been an earlier 
> discussion on [EMAIL PROTECTED] where
>    other developers (not just me) agreed that such long names are a burden to 
> write; but we could leave that also for later.

See previous comment, we can do that as we did for the ackvec, in a
separate patch, but lets leave this for later now, trying to use
namespacing but with shorter names, that even looking cryptic can help
in searching for RX stamps, for instance, as we will iterate thru them
using the editor search routine and don't get distracted with the TX
tstamps, for instance, or search for them with grep.

- Arnaldo
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