Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwael...@jacobs-university.de> wrote: > On Thu, Apr 21, 2016 at 12:24:09PM +0200, Martin Bjorklund wrote: > > Hi Benoit, > > > > Benoit Claise <bcla...@cisco.com> wrote: > > > Dear all, > > > > > > Here is part 1 of my AD review. > > > > > > I found this useful: > > > http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff/rfcdiff.pyht?url1=http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc6020.txt&url2=http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-11.txt > > > > > > - Do we want to mention RESTCONF in the abstract? From the new charter: > > > > > > The NETMOD working group has defined the data modeling language > > > YANG, which can be used to specify network management data models > > > that are transported over such protocols as NETCONF and RESTCONF. > > > > > > OLD: > > > > > > YANG is a data modeling language used to model configuration data, > > > state data, remote procedure calls, and notifications for network > > > management protocols like the Network Configuration Protocol > > > (NETCONF). > > > > > > NEW: > > > > > > YANG is a data modeling language used to model configuration data, > > > state data, remote procedure calls, and notifications for network > > > management protocols transported over such protocols as Network > > > Configuration Protocol (NETCONF) and RESTCONF. This document specifies > > > the YANG mappings to NETCONF. > > > > The first paragraph in the introduction mentions other protocols; > > RESCTONF and CoMI. My personal opinion is that this is sufficient, > > but I'd like to hear what others think. > > I agree with less is more since we do not know how many protocols will > eventually transport YANG-defined data. What I like about Benoit's > proposal is that it clearly says that this document provides the > mappings to NETCONF. So how about this? > > YANG is a data modeling language used to model configuration data, > state data, remote procedure calls, and notifications for network > management protocols. This document also specifies the YANG mappings > to the Network Configuration Protocol (NETCONF).
Yes, this is better! /martin _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
