Hi Michael, On 6/19/17, 3:20 AM, "netmod on behalf of wangzitao" <netmod-boun...@ietf.org on behalf of wangzi...@huawei.com> wrote:
>Hi Authors, > >I have read this draft and think it is very useful. However, IMHO, there >are also something need to improved. For example: ># In section2 Tree Diagram Syntax, it describes " ! for a presence >container", but in some draft/ RFC the container not be marked by "!", >for example "ietf-interface" [RFC7223]. ># And I suggest to highlight the symbol "-w", How do you highlight a symbol in plain ASCII text? Thanks, Acee >it usually appears in "input" of RPC, for example "ietf-yang-push" >[draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push] > >Please consider my suggestion. > >Best Regards! >-Michael > >-----邮件原件----- >发件人: netmod [mailto:netmod-boun...@ietf.org] 代表 internet-dra...@ietf.org >发送时间: 2017年6月13日 20:34 >收件人: i-d-annou...@ietf.org >抄送: netmod@ietf.org >主题: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00.txt > > >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >directories. >This draft is a work item of the NETCONF Data Modeling Language of the >IETF. > > Title : YANG Tree Diagrams > Authors : Martin Bjorklund > Lou Berger > Filename : draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00.txt > Pages : 4 > Date : 2017-06-13 > >Abstract: > This document captures the current syntax used in YANG module Tree > Diagrams. The purpose of the document is to provide a single > location for this definition. This syntax may be updated from time > to time based on the evolution of the YANG language. > > >The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams/ > >There are also htmlized versions available at: >https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00 >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams >-00 > > >Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of >submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at >tools.ietf.org. > >Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > >_______________________________________________ >netmod mailing list >netmod@ietf.org >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod >_______________________________________________ >netmod mailing list >netmod@ietf.org >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
