Hi Clyde, In my drafts that depend on more than one work in progress, I typically assign each of them a value (e.g., XXXX, YYYY, ZZZZ) and then have RFC Editor instructions mapping each to a specific value.
Kent // contributor -- Tom, The agreement was that I should use “xxxx” until the two unapproved RFCs that the model depends on are assigned numbers. RFC xxxx: Keystore Management RFC xxxx: Transport Layer Security (TLS) Client"; Imported are: import ietf-tls-client { prefix tlsc; } import ietf-keystore { prefix ks; } Have numbers been assigned? Thanks, Clyde On 8/9/17, 4:32 AM, "t.petch" <ie...@btconnect.com> wrote: Clyde You use xxxx as a placeholder for three different RFC and two of these do not appear AFAICT in the list of References. This might be a challenge for the RFC Editor. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Clyde Wildes (cwildes)" <cwil...@cisco.com> Sent: Wednesday, July 19, 2017 6:48 PM > Hi Alex, > > Answers inline as [clyde]… > > On 7/17/17, 4:20 PM, "netmod on behalf of Alex Campbell" <netmod-boun...@ietf.org on behalf of alex.campb...@aviatnet.com> wrote: > > I am considering to implement the data model in this draft. (dependent on business priorities of course) > I have reviewed this draft and found the following issues. > > * I see pattern-match is specified to use POSIX 1003.2 regular expressions. This is presumably for compatibility with existing implementations; however it is inconsistent with most of YANG (which is specified to use XPath regular expressions) - unless these are the same. > > [clyde] I believe that my answer in the other thread explains why we used Posix 1003.2 – it is commonly used. > > * pattern-match is inside the facility-filter container; common sense says this is wrong as pattern-match has nothing to do with facilities. > > [clyde] I will move pattern-match up one level in the next version of the draft. Thanks for catching this! > > * The advanced-compare container groups together two nodes that share a common "when" and "if-feature" statement, but don't seem to have any semantic relation to each other. Are there general guidelines on when to use a container? > > [clyde] The confusion may come as a result of the when clause appearing before the if-feature clause which is set by the IETF statement order recommendation. > > The when construct was suggested by Martin Björklund as a way of solving the case that advanced-compare does not apply for the ‘all’ and ‘none’ case. > > The if-feature applies to the entire container – it is either supported or not. > > * The advanced-compare container has a description starting with "This leaf ..." even though it is not a leaf. > > [clyde] This will be fixed in the next draft. > > * The examples are missing <facility-filter> nodes. > > [clyde] This will be fixed in the next draft. > > * Perhaps there should be more consistent terminology for receivers of syslog messages; both "collectors" and "actions" are used in the draft. RFC 5424 uses "collector" for the ultimate recipient of a log message - which might not be applicable, because the sending system has no idea whether the receiving system is a collector or a relay. > > [clyde] The definition of “collector” in RFC 5424 is: A "collector" gathers syslog content for further analysis. > > actions relate to the “further analysis” taken by the “collector”. > > “Collectors” appears in the model under the remote action and I believe the usage is correct: > container remote { > if-feature remote-action; > description > "This container describes the configuration parameters for > forwarding syslog messages to remote relays or collectors."; > > I will revise the description of these terms in the next draft. > > Thanks, > > Clyde > > ________________________________________ > From: netmod <netmod-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of Kent Watsen <kwat...@juniper.net> > Sent: Saturday, 8 July 2017 6:34 a.m. _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod