Tom, I am working with Mahesh to fix the Normative References.
Regarding line length: I am using pyang 1.7.3 which is not complaining about line length in the model. But when I look at the draft I see that both the tree and the model exceed 80 characters. I will make a pass to shorten lines. Thanks, Clyde On 8/17/17, 4:54 AM, "t.petch" <ie...@btconnect.com> wrote: Clyde I like the introduction of yyyy and zzzz; but I still hanker after Normative References to I-Ds, draft-ietf-netconf-keystore and draft-ietf-netconf-tls-client-server. I think that they are required. Also, in -15 and in -16, the line length seems to have gone wrong and is now too long; I notice it in the Description clauses. It was ok in -13. " Each line must be limited to 72 characters followed by the character sequence that denotes an end-of-line (EOL). This limit includes any left-side indentation. " Tom Petch ---- Original Message ----- From: <internet-dra...@ietf.org> To: <i-d-annou...@ietf.org> Cc: <netmod@ietf.org> Sent: Saturday, August 12, 2017 3:17 AM > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. > This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF. > > Title : A YANG Data Model for Syslog Configuration > Authors : Clyde Wildes > Kiran Koushik > Filename : draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-16.txt > Pages : 30 > Date : 2017-08-11 > > Abstract: > This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration of a > syslog process. It is intended this model be used by vendors who > implement syslog in their systems. > > Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor) > > This draft contains many placeholder values that need to be replaced > with finalized values at the time of publication. This note > summarizes all of the substitutions that are needed. No other RFC > Editor instructions are specified elsewhere in this document. > > Artwork in this document contains shorthand references to drafts in > progress. Please apply the following replacements: > > o "xxxx" --> the assigned RFC value for draft-ietf-netconf-keystore > > o "yyyy" --> the assigned RFC value for draft-ietf-netconf-tls- > client-server > > o "zzzz" --> the assigned RFC value for this draft > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-16 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-16 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-16 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > netmod@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod