Lou On a slightly different tack, so a slightly modified Subject: line, when an I-D contains multiple modules, some place all the models together and then all the modules, e.g. draft-hares-i2nsf-capability-data-model-04 while others intersperse the models and the modules, e.g. draft-ietf-lisp-yang-05 .
I think the former is superior and should be recommended, especially when, as Sue has done, there is a brief paragraph of text before each model, so it is very clear where a model ends and another begins. With the latter, models can be hard to find. I see this as dovetailing into Juergen's comments on RFC7317 which, to me, is really several separate modules packaged as one, so the separation makes excellent sense to a reader. Where the I-D is already several modules, then do as RFC7317 has done. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Lou Berger" <lber...@labn.net> To: <netmod@ietf.org> Sent: Wednesday, October 25, 2017 2:13 PM > Hi, > > This version addresses all known / open issues in the draft known to > the authors. > > The changes are as follows: > - Added groupings and yang-data descriptions > - Added Comments, Long Diagrams and Security Considerations sections > - Clarified representation of schema mount points and representation of > modules exposed using schema mount. > - Miscellaneous editorial changes > > Lou (for draft authors) > > On 10/25/2017 8:49 AM, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. > > This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF. > > > > Title : YANG Tree Diagrams > > Authors : Martin Bjorklund > > Lou Berger > > Filename : draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-02.txt > > Pages : 11 > > Date : 2017-10-25 > > > > Abstract: > > This document captures the current syntax used in YANG module Tree > > Diagrams. The purpose of the document is to provide a single > > location for this definition. This syntax may be updated from time > > to time based on the evolution of the YANG language. > > > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams/ > > > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-02 > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagra ms-02 > > > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-0 2 > > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > > _______________________________________________ > > netmod mailing list > > netmod@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod > > > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > netmod@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod > _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
